Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, Missing Me, reminds me of being away and getting great shots of the family. It only now occurs to me that I have few with me in the group. Being away had its toll.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2016

Yeah, they put little cutouts of my face, but not quite the same as being there, cheers, j Thanks for the review.

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

This is another piece with exceptional insight! The message comes across loud and clear. My suggestion would be to incorporate them all into one piece.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016

Thanks for the review, but I don't understand what you mean by 'incorporate them all into one piece.' Cheers, j

reply by johnwilson on 13-Jul-2016

I know they're a particular style; however, just my thinking aloud here...I thought you could put them all together.

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016

Do you mean put into one line? cheers,j

reply by johnwilson on 13-Jul-2016

No...I meant to put together several of your poems into one poem...sorry, I wasn't very clear and I know this is a style.

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016

Okay, now I get it. Yes, those haikus and 161's are a challenge to put a point across in so few words. Thanks for the review and suggestion, cheers, j

Comment from fimarie78

Excellent

When I read your poem, I presumed you meant that you were always the one taking the photographs. Sad to hear that you don't see your family often. It's a good 1-6-1.
well done
Fiona

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016

Thanks for the review, yeah I try to get back summers but sometimes can't. They put a cut out of my face in some, but just not the same ha ha cheers, j