No One
a 1-6-112 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image for the poem.
-I like the change in font
to represent the different ideas in the poem.
-A strong message comes through.
-You are alone
with no one to help or advise you
when there should be.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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-Good image for the poem.
-I like the change in font
to represent the different ideas in the poem.
-A strong message comes through.
-You are alone
with no one to help or advise you
when there should be.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thank you, respa, For the excellent review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from VictoriaJoyce
Very well written. Follows the format of the style of poetry. I absolutely love the photo. However, I hope it is not you that you portray in your writing.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Very well written. Follows the format of the style of poetry. I absolutely love the photo. However, I hope it is not you that you portray in your writing.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thank you, Victoria, For the excellent review. It's not about me. I'm blessed.
