Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Sweet fairy spring story, excellent choice for spring. I enjoyed it very much . The illustration is beautiful and the words bouncy and fresh. I am reading them now and will come back and vote.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review and vote. It was a fun write, cheers, j

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

A very lovely entry into the Spring poem contest. I really enjoyed this well-penned work. The verses are lovely and move one to the next with such an easy flow. The rhyming is spot on as is your meter. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, it was a fun write, cheers, j

Comment from roseworker

Exceptional

Beautiful! This poem really works and the last line is outstanding! (Sorry I don't know what camassia is, though. Wish I could picture it.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016

Thanks for the review and 6 shiny stars. Camassia is a perennial from the asparagus family. I love gardening too and this summer I have planted lots of wildflowers for our friends the bees. Cheers, j

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is the kind of poem I like. Smooth rhymes, even meter and an uplifting theme with lots of personification. Excellent job!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016

Aww thanks for that, just having fun on a sinday afternoon, cheers, j

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

This is delightful.
I enjoyed the personification of the seasons.
Vivid imagery throughout made for a very enjoyable read.

Well done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016

Thanks Janet for the sweet review, just having fun on a Sunday. I miss the arrival of spring in Canada, in Africa always warm, but wet and dry seasons, cheers, j