Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

As John Lennon said. "Let's give peace a chance"

I really liked the message in this ultra short poetic format. This is something most people on this planet want. This was well-written and enjoyable to have read... John

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016

Thank you so much. Yes, it's something we desperately need. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from LisaD123

Excellent

I liked the way that the ideas flowed and think the best poem's in see form make it work as a complete sentence. Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Ginger Banks

Excellent

This poem has a truth for everyone to take a heart. It is needed, this is the longest war ever and as a Mother of two in it, the prayer is needed for all.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016

Thank you so very much. The plea is needed. All the best. Ulla.:)))

reply by Ginger Banks on 11-Jul-2016

Amen! You're welcome.

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

I love the theme and the delivery is very good with a fine presentation. Superb fluid flow and fine rhyme plus slant rhyme. I do not know if the contest is strict about rhymes being pure or slant or not...but i think this works well read aloud. Very fine alliteration of P and consonance of S plus soft C. Good luck!

Warmly, rd

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 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2016

Rama, thank you so very much. I did well in the contest. So much problem with the Internet of late, so I'm desperately behind. Hope it's okay now. So pleased you liked my wee poem. All the best. Ulla:)))

reply by rama devi on 14-Jul-2016

Congrats for doing well in the contest! Thanks for your nice reply. Warmly, rd

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the contest
Excellent rhymes
and exact syllables at 1-6-1
Excellent message
in a great presentation
Maybe wishes will come true
We can hope anyway
Good luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016

Thanks a lot for the great review and comments. All the best