Mike (Flash fiction, 483 words)
One boy saves the life of another31 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this story and the twist at the end was brilliant. excellent imagery presented in this story. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this story and the twist at the end was brilliant. excellent imagery presented in this story. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much. the contest only allowed five hundred words and it was a real challenge to write. I so appreciate your comments.
