To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Truth or Bare"Poems by Michael
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Comment from dmt1967
This is very dark for you. I thought it was Dean but as there was no eerie music looked at the name and profile lol. I like this side of you, my friend and welcome to the dark side lol. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016
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This is very dark for you. I thought it was Dean but as there was no eerie music looked at the name and profile lol. I like this side of you, my friend and welcome to the dark side lol. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016
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what...? whats that ya say!...HARD TO HEAR DOWN HERE!...ahhaha...yea....sure is. thanks for stopping by. love to you....michael
Comment from Sis Cat
This is almost like a rap or spoken word poem. There is a joyous use of sounds and imagery. The effect is modern cubism, kaleidoscopic. It has rhythm and displays your distinctive voice. No one writes poetry like you in FanStory. Thank you for sharing this free verse trip.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2016
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This is almost like a rap or spoken word poem. There is a joyous use of sounds and imagery. The effect is modern cubism, kaleidoscopic. It has rhythm and displays your distinctive voice. No one writes poetry like you in FanStory. Thank you for sharing this free verse trip.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2016
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ha...well thank you Brother.
well I wish I could say the pleasure was mine all the time...but most of the time is as close as possible I suppose...haha...thanks man. love to you...Michael
Comment from Caressa_08
Yes, a lot of people get by with murder, and lately, we have seen many who follow those of ISIS and kill without mercy and do themselves commit suicide at times. Or, those sick individuals, or too, those that have Satan's curse who use guns as their alibi to show how low down their souls are to harbor such hate...and engage it, causing so much of this hatred to cause terrible harm to others, and I can only hope they will get punishment in the afterlifr....or what God seems fit for their terrible sins.
The words you used can apply like, whore, hairy, and I think bellies, could possibly refer to wombs?... And some here I think of what they misinterpreted them to what they think they usually mean ...these particular words. And totally have misgraded your poem, they should look these words up and they might learn something. Though, too, I think you should have listed their meanings to clarify the confusion...Anyways, I have always liked Bruce Springsteen and all of his music...And Born in the USA... I can't help think of that song on Independence Day.
God Bless, Reconciled....Caressa_08
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2016
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Yes, a lot of people get by with murder, and lately, we have seen many who follow those of ISIS and kill without mercy and do themselves commit suicide at times. Or, those sick individuals, or too, those that have Satan's curse who use guns as their alibi to show how low down their souls are to harbor such hate...and engage it, causing so much of this hatred to cause terrible harm to others, and I can only hope they will get punishment in the afterlifr....or what God seems fit for their terrible sins.
The words you used can apply like, whore, hairy, and I think bellies, could possibly refer to wombs?... And some here I think of what they misinterpreted them to what they think they usually mean ...these particular words. And totally have misgraded your poem, they should look these words up and they might learn something. Though, too, I think you should have listed their meanings to clarify the confusion...Anyways, I have always liked Bruce Springsteen and all of his music...And Born in the USA... I can't help think of that song on Independence Day.
God Bless, Reconciled....Caressa_08
Comment Written 04-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2016
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Hey you...-smile-
thats correct....but there are different kinds of murder. and "deliberate" suffers consequence...it is the "law" since Able.
yes ....there is One Hope. but "some" have become coldblooded to it. They have no "genuineness" left in them. They wouldn't know how or could ever be sincere enough to humble themselves as sinful. Anyway....-smile- "belies" old English...to "contradict" or make false. hairy is a play on words...but yes I understand. thank you for shining on me. love to you ...Michael
Comment from Ginger Banks
So many unusual messages in this poem, the music and the words along with the picture all go very well together. Wow. One really must take their time to listen and read to gain the message. Is this a bad thing? No; thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2016
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So many unusual messages in this poem, the music and the words along with the picture all go very well together. Wow. One really must take their time to listen and read to gain the message. Is this a bad thing? No; thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2016
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hey Ginger...-smile-
yea, I can see that, to me though it's perfectly clear. Truly it s all in my writing from the beginning...ya know when I was born here...-smile-....ah a time ago heaven was "stolen" from me. and I asked Faith to prove it back....basically....in long drawn out experience. I heard the song...and knew I would write for it and whom for...but the day I wrote his brother came to visit, apparently to intimidate me. It motivated a concentrated effort....-smile-....love to you Lady. Michael
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You're welcome.
Comment from LIJ Red
Meter readings that aren't accurate are dangerous, be it static, high lines overhead, equipment failure, or local station. Guesswork's no good even if you do hit it. Are you talking about O.J. or O bama?
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Meter readings that aren't accurate are dangerous, be it static, high lines overhead, equipment failure, or local station. Guesswork's no good even if you do hit it. Are you talking about O.J. or O bama?
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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well...let me start off by saying....this has nothing to do with anybody's sister. -headnod-....no this was written for a psychopath who crossed my road....and liked me for some G-D reason....anyway, it was a real big mistake...almost fixed now. thanks. love to you....Michael
Comment from Lynn27
This is well-written poem but it's hard to understand. I found some of line were powerful that explained your message. This piece makes the reader to reflect on the words.
Happy Writing!
Lynn
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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This is well-written poem but it's hard to understand. I found some of line were powerful that explained your message. This piece makes the reader to reflect on the words.
Happy Writing!
Lynn
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Hi Lynn...-smile-
yes I suppose. its very personal and eternally important. Some suppose they're "more" then um Gods love for David and gamble consequence wont catch them. Even after a lifetime of witness. Strange how we deceive ourselves. "there is a way that seems right to a man, but the end therein is death" ...God said. anyway, thanks. love to you ....Michael
Comment from Zue65
I like the strong social message of this poem that is relevant to the pulse of the times with the current terror threat that America is facing right now. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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I like the strong social message of this poem that is relevant to the pulse of the times with the current terror threat that America is facing right now. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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yes,....but they're reign is weakening, soon to be nothing left at all. thank you sweet Lady. love to you ....Michael
Comment from c_lucas
There is a saying I heard back when I was in my twenties; "The Devil pays in counterfeit money." Your poem reminded me of it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of word, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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There is a saying I heard back when I was in my twenties; "The Devil pays in counterfeit money." Your poem reminded me of it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of word, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Amen...aint that the truth. Hey Charlie....good to see you man....-smile-....love to you. Michael
Comment from royowen
Like you, I much prefer Christ's edict of mercy not judgement, but we all need to accept that gift of absolution. Yes, but unfortunately man wants to remain judge and juror, to divert attention from his and our own wrongdoing, well done Michael, excellent piece of poetic art, it's almost rhyme and rhythm, beautifully, one of your best, in my opinion, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Like you, I much prefer Christ's edict of mercy not judgement, but we all need to accept that gift of absolution. Yes, but unfortunately man wants to remain judge and juror, to divert attention from his and our own wrongdoing, well done Michael, excellent piece of poetic art, it's almost rhyme and rhythm, beautifully, one of your best, in my opinion, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Thank you Roy. Really means a lot coming from you. I've admired and respected you from a distance for a long time now. I trust you're real. love to you...Michael
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And I you, Michael, you're obviously unique and special, and and like Christ, acquainted with grief, yes you have a beautiful heart, my friend. Therefore my admiration is manifold, bless you Bro.
Comment from lucy marie
Hi there gorgeous! .... A stunning work . I always feel your words but reading this after listening to the amazing voice of Bruce I had a tightening in my throat .... So emotive .
Lucy Marie x
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Hi there gorgeous! .... A stunning work . I always feel your words but reading this after listening to the amazing voice of Bruce I had a tightening in my throat .... So emotive .
Lucy Marie x
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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I'm so happy to see you....really bigsmile-.....ah there's long torturous journey in this one.....I never asked for it, never did anything to warrant it.....but some men wish they were God. I don't want to sully us with the disgusting details.....just know I wasn't the one who forced his will. I got God on my side....smile.....I'm working.....but I wish I were in England. Always love for you.....michael
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In my heart babe .... You know this xx.
