Three Old Friends. Part Four
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is getting exciting, Ulla, what on earth is it that Audrey wants to talk about, she must have known her ex friends would not go easy on her, or want to see her, not after what she did. Excellent, my friend. One tiny nit, you have speech tags in the middle of Marjory's sentence. Well done, don't be too long with the next part! :) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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This is getting exciting, Ulla, what on earth is it that Audrey wants to talk about, she must have known her ex friends would not go easy on her, or want to see her, not after what she did. Excellent, my friend. One tiny nit, you have speech tags in the middle of Marjory's sentence. Well done, don't be too long with the next part! :) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Hi Sandra, I just can't believe how late I am in answering this and I do ask my appologies. A hug. Ullaxxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
You really have my attention. What in the world would make her contact them after all those years and why drag it out. Cut to the chase as they say. It is obvious there is a lot of resentment built up in these three women. I am anxious to learn why. Good job Ulla. xx Nancy
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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You really have my attention. What in the world would make her contact them after all those years and why drag it out. Cut to the chase as they say. It is obvious there is a lot of resentment built up in these three women. I am anxious to learn why. Good job Ulla. xx Nancy
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Nancy thank you so much and so sorry for the late response. I have no excuse. Just catching up. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment from Douglas Paul
Your writing is clear and fluid and the story flows well. I am curious about why Audrey invited them to lunch, especially since her husband died. I can see why the girls would not want to engage in small talk and would like to get to the point of the luncheon. I am enjoying your story and it is holding my attention.
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Your writing is clear and fluid and the story flows well. I am curious about why Audrey invited them to lunch, especially since her husband died. I can see why the girls would not want to engage in small talk and would like to get to the point of the luncheon. I am enjoying your story and it is holding my attention.
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Hi Douglas, Thanks a lot for the review, and so sorry I'm so late. No excuses. A;; the best. Ulla:))
