Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem. Black and white photography is very beautiful when the photographer knows his trade well. My wedding photos are also black and white by choice.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Oh how nice Sandra.

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I liked the black background shade and the poems sweet tone. This is a poem about a true love. They met, slept together on the first night, and then got married. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Hayley Solomon

Good

Great story, lovely poem. You mix your tenses - I am not sure if this is deliberately.
I love your last towlines, well done both poetically and for the marriage. I might have made a new sentence after black and white. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week,

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

What a lovely story written in poetry for this prompt. I'm glad you clicked and it lasted. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week,

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

A nicely penned free verse on black and white, If life were only as simple as black and white (I don't mean races) the colorful world makes it harder to live in.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

The "crA?A" in this poem seriously detracts from its overall quality.

Since this is a contest entry you may wish to revisit this easy to correct edit.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.

Comment from CEO2020

Excellent

I love the title and presentation but the poem falls flat to me . It seems like you're thinking of things to write and not knowing what to write. Maybe it's just me but the title and presentation is worth five stars. If the words matched I would have given six.

If you have time, please review my short story called. The Verdict. I would like your opinion.

Thanks

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.