The Daredevil Girls From Bunker Hil
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "A Desperate Plan"A fantasy novel about good fighting evil.
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine chapter, Rhonda--and I've often found having an intello-cat comes in VERY handy! Well, to be honest, I've never dealt with one who can understand my every word, but I can just imagine!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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Another fine chapter, Rhonda--and I've often found having an intello-cat comes in VERY handy! Well, to be honest, I've never dealt with one who can understand my every word, but I can just imagine!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much for your review. It wasn't supposed to be released yet. I hadn't even gotten the editing and revising done. Feel free to go back if you would like. It's never happened to me before, but thanks for reviewing.
Rhonda
Comment from Douglas Paul
Another good chapter, Rhonda. Good to see that Sage didn't get screwed LOL. I think this chapter is very believable and I like the two boys taking an active role. Your writing flows smoothly as always and I saw no errors.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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Another good chapter, Rhonda. Good to see that Sage didn't get screwed LOL. I think this chapter is very believable and I like the two boys taking an active role. Your writing flows smoothly as always and I saw no errors.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much for your review. It wasn't supposed to be released yet. I hadn't even gotten the editing and revising done. Feel free to go back if you would like. It's never happened to me before, but thanks for reviewing.
Rhonda
Comment from sage17611
Your story continue to interesting. It is well written and narrated nicely, making the read easy to follow and enjoyable. You have presented the characters very well, and the dialog is easy to follow. I like the length of the post which is not too overwhelming to the reader. Good job with this write.
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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Your story continue to interesting. It is well written and narrated nicely, making the read easy to follow and enjoyable. You have presented the characters very well, and the dialog is easy to follow. I like the length of the post which is not too overwhelming to the reader. Good job with this write.
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much for your review. It wasn't supposed to be released yet. I hadn't even gotten the editing and revising done. Feel free to go back if you would like. It's never happened to me before, but thanks for reviewing.
Rhonda
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Rhonda, this story gets better with each segment. Sally is one tough little girl and Sage is one very intelligent feline. Quite a combination. I hope whatever the plan is, it works out perfectly.
Well done my friend,,,,Jim
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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Rhonda, this story gets better with each segment. Sally is one tough little girl and Sage is one very intelligent feline. Quite a combination. I hope whatever the plan is, it works out perfectly.
Well done my friend,,,,Jim
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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Thank you, Jim! Yes, they are both hard at work. I appreciate you keeping up with the story. Take care. I look forward to your next post,
Rhonda
