Total Commando
Life is so funny, sometimes.10 total reviews
Comment from write hand blue
Going commando is obviously a summer occupation, one wouldn't want those freezing winter draughts around the nether regions. LOL.
An amusing tale that could easily be true... ~Merl~
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016
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Going commando is obviously a summer occupation, one wouldn't want those freezing winter draughts around the nether regions. LOL.
An amusing tale that could easily be true... ~Merl~
Comment Written 06-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016
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Many thanks for visiting my site and reading. I'll return the favor soon. This story has made a bunch of people laugh and for that I'm so thankful. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Domino 2
I love your humour here, Mike.
You also have the skill to make the dialogue sound real, and your speech tags convey extra imagery, rather the boring, 'I said/she said' etc.
Cheers, Ray.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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I love your humour here, Mike.
You also have the skill to make the dialogue sound real, and your speech tags convey extra imagery, rather the boring, 'I said/she said' etc.
Cheers, Ray.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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Many thanks for your kind words and awesome review. I'm so glad this story made so many people smile. Thanks again. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Bryana
This is very funny, I never heard of thiscommando business.
It made laugh, I wonder how many times I've gone commando.
You writing was fun to read. I certainly enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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This is very funny, I never heard of thiscommando business.
It made laugh, I wonder how many times I've gone commando.
You writing was fun to read. I certainly enjoyed it.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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Many thanks for your kind words and awesome review. I'm so glad this story made so many people smile. I can't wait to read your new poems. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Beara Bella
Tou are right this is a humor story. My favorite part was the Tennessee part. That made me laugh, probably cause it's redneck. I do like the socks part, but not as much Is this based on a real event or is it something that came up all because you saw that toilet paper commercial?
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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Tou are right this is a humor story. My favorite part was the Tennessee part. That made me laugh, probably cause it's redneck. I do like the socks part, but not as much Is this based on a real event or is it something that came up all because you saw that toilet paper commercial?
Comment Written 27-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016
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Wanda actually asked me the question and it was almost has funny has the story. Many thanks for the kind words and the awesome review. I'll be by your site to read soon. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from MTF1955
That was a lot of fun. Enjoyed the easy banter between your characters. Loved your explanation of the three commandos. Great job. Mary
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
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That was a lot of fun. Enjoyed the easy banter between your characters. Loved your explanation of the three commandos. Great job. Mary
Comment Written 26-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
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Many thanks for the awesome review. I'm entering this story in a Nano fiction contest. It's got a lot of love, so far. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from cterp
You got it: beginning, middle, and end, right down to the punch line. Nice job. I've seen that commercial. I think it's an Eastern term because we've used it for years.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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You got it: beginning, middle, and end, right down to the punch line. Nice job. I've seen that commercial. I think it's an Eastern term because we've used it for years.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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Many thanks for the awesome review. I'll be by your site to read. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from zekeziemann
You can learn something every day on Fan Story. I have never heard of going commando. I guess I'm old fashioned. Well Done.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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You can learn something every day on Fan Story. I have never heard of going commando. I guess I'm old fashioned. Well Done.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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Many thanks for the awesome review. I'll be by your site to read. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Dawn Munro
First, regarding your notes - you have classified this very funny story as "flash fiction", so you need to change the classification to "biographical" or else remove that part of your notes (that says it's a true story).
Now, as to the story itself - I'm grinning so widely my face hurts. :)) I didn't know what going Commando meant either - I thought it meant violent fighting! (LOL)
This is flawless, and very, very amusing. I wish I could return the favor and rate this as it deserves (and NOT tit for tat, but because it truly is outstanding). Unfortunately, I gave my last six away yesterday.
*************LAUGH-OUT-LOUD FUNNY - OUTSTANDING!!****************
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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First, regarding your notes - you have classified this very funny story as "flash fiction", so you need to change the classification to "biographical" or else remove that part of your notes (that says it's a true story).
Now, as to the story itself - I'm grinning so widely my face hurts. :)) I didn't know what going Commando meant either - I thought it meant violent fighting! (LOL)
This is flawless, and very, very amusing. I wish I could return the favor and rate this as it deserves (and NOT tit for tat, but because it truly is outstanding). Unfortunately, I gave my last six away yesterday.
*************LAUGH-OUT-LOUD FUNNY - OUTSTANDING!!****************
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
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I am so glad you enjoyed this little gem of life. Many thanks for the awesome review and the thought of a six for a piece of flash. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from F. Wehr3
You ain't got no drawers on. Loved this line! Nice piece of flash fiction. I found a couple of things for your consideration.
Wanda, meekly replies. "No."-- suggest comma instead of a period after replies.
So, I'm lower Commando, today."--No comma needed after a coordinating conjunction (So).
I manage to say. "You go, girl!"-- same as above comma after say.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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You ain't got no drawers on. Loved this line! Nice piece of flash fiction. I found a couple of things for your consideration.
Wanda, meekly replies. "No."-- suggest comma instead of a period after replies.
So, I'm lower Commando, today."--No comma needed after a coordinating conjunction (So).
I manage to say. "You go, girl!"-- same as above comma after say.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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Many thanks for your help with this story. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from tfawcus
A hilarious domestic scene! I must say that I'm with your wife on not knowing, up until now, what 'going commando' meant. It would be interesting to research the derivation of the term. There is a suggestion of clandestine skirmishes!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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A hilarious domestic scene! I must say that I'm with your wife on not knowing, up until now, what 'going commando' meant. It would be interesting to research the derivation of the term. There is a suggestion of clandestine skirmishes!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016
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Thanks for reading and I'm so glad you liked it. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
