Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

Another powerful spiritual poem so well written.
The connection between God as the master of all and the passing of time is clever and well portrayed.
A perfect scripture quote and quite a powerful reminder to us all.
Life, just like time is fleeting.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016

Thanks Shirley for these lovely words and encouraging review, blessings, Roy

Comment from GE Parson

Exceptional

MY BROTHER RRY,
WHAT A MOVING PIECE OF POETICAL OIL PAINTING DESCRIBING THE BEAUTIFUL LIFE OF THE bELIEVER IN CHRIST.

MAY I SUGGEST YOU IMPRINT THIS ON A SLAB OF WOOD / OR A CANVAS AND FRAME IT / SENDIT TO A CHRISTIAN MAGAZINE FOR PUBLISHING.

I HAVE KNOTS OF JOY WELLING UP IN MY BOULS AS I WRITE THIS REVIEW.(Caps on purpose)


With your permision I am going to print it on a piece
of card stock and frame it....in fact I am going to do it WITHOUT your permission!!

Your favorite fan,
Jerry

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Dear brother, you will always have my permission to do whatever you wish with anything I write, you're precious man of God, and the work belongs to Him, thank you for these wonderful words,, blessings, Roy

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this. You did such a good job capturing the essence of what life in human form really is. The entire poem was terrific, but I particularly enjoyed the last stanza.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thanks Lou, for your kind words and your encouraging review , I'm pleased you like it, blessings, Roy

Comment from bubblejellybean

Excellent

Wow so powerful! I absolutely love your writing! What true talent. Everything flows so well! I'm excited to see more of your things:)

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind words and your encouraging review , I'm pleased you like it, blessings, Roy

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

My life is like a breath of wind,
a vapour on the breeze;
like tiny drops held in a cloud,
then lost to stormy seas.

These are some of the most beautiful words. Great poem thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind words and your encouraging review , I'm pleased you like it, blessings, Roy

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

A vivid expression of the transience of mortal life, but rather than dwelling on the negative aspects of this, you have shown how, with divine help, we can make the most of those few precious moments granted to us. Your metaphors for the brief measure of our life are apt and striking.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thanks Tony, for your kind words and your encouraging comments, I'm pleased you like it, blessings, Roy

Comment from ravim

Excellent

Oh, this is profound. You'v penned a closely knit thought that transcends Time and Space. It's lyrical, cute and wonderfully imaginative. I esp. love the lines:
To see those streets, all paved with gold
and walk eternal lands;
we'll enter into heaven's courts,
where time no longer stands.

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind words and your encouraging comments, I'm pleased you like it, blessings, Roy

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

The older I get the faster time seems to pass. Every year is like moment where as when I was a child, time lasted forever and I wanted it to move ahead.

Thank you for your lovely poem, Roy. It says many things that I feel: 'My life is like a flash not seen,
a fleeting glimpse of light; '

:) e

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

You and me both Ellen, I think time's speeding up, a conspiracy I think, thanks for your kind words and your encouraging comments, I'm pleased you like it, blessings, Roy

Comment from Ginger Banks

Excellent

Wow, a fabulous poem of incredible imagery with the importance of God's handiwork along in the blessing. Thank you for sharing such an inspired and lovely piece,

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind words and your encouraging comments, I'm pleased you like it, blessings, Roy

reply by Ginger Banks on 27-Jun-2016

You're welcome.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello,

I loved your poem about the power of God in our lives. Your rhyming and meter were perfect and the presentation was awesome. The picture is very scary but I like horror. LOL

I can tell you have a great love for God. It reflects on everything you write. Good job!

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016

Thanks Gypsy, for your kind words and your encouraging comments, I'm pleased you like it, blessings, Roy