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Astatula (Final Edition)

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A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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OMG you got us involved with the story of BeeBo and than pulled the rug out from under us with the last sentence.
Excellent piece, no problems noted

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 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Stay tuned Much more to come.