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A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?

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Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Brett. Very well written Mate. Such a sad story of how resentment and jealousy can turn a person into a monster and a life into nothing but decay. No errors or spags that I can see my friend.

Well done.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
    Don't they always turn a person that way? Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story, Much more to come.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Brett,

Thanks for sharing more of your story. You are always so good at doing it and I always enjoy reading it. I'm so sorry to hear that Cody flat lined. He was such a nice boy.

Kat

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Stay tuned. Much more to come.
reply by MizKat on 26-Jun-2016
    I will stay tuned. Kat
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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So Brock Daniels resumed his job as sheriff so he could catch his X-friend Mark Bannister aka Bee-Bo the Clown. As if he doesn't have enough on his plate Cody flatlines? Why? He was getting better. What next? Nancy

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Some times turns for the worse happen with patients. However, stay tuned. Much more to come.
Comment from MTF1955
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I wish I had a six for this chapter. I liked to have had a heart attack with that last line. Great job with describing the past and bringing us up to date. Great job. Mary

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Much more to come.
Comment from create4christ
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OH NO!! I'm sitting here shaking my head about Mark (aka BeeBo)...Then, that last sentence! I hope you'll be posting more soon, because I need to know that Cody is okay...Needless to say, I really get in to my books... Once, I actually prayed for a fiction character...lol
Anyway, as always, this continuation of your novel was captivating! Keep sharing.

ANXIOUSLY WAITING!! Penny

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Stay tuned. Much more to come.
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
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Brett, this is a very informative and very intense story. The entitled do have a much different attitude about what reality is all about. I am very happy that Brock got his badge back and that he is now ready for whatever Bannister tries.

A very good read Brett that kept me engaged from start to finish,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Glad you enjoyed this portion. Much more to come so stay tuned.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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So, Brock decides to retake his role as Sheriff so he can handle the menace of Bee-Bo the clown. Looks like he's definitely the man for the role. However, Cody has now taken a turn for the worse and may be in mortal danger.
Exciting chapter,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Stay tuned. Much more to come.
Comment from misscookie
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It wonderful to read a young man reaching for his purpose in life and how his friend didn't seem to care
. I know this is a story but these things happen in real life...
Speaking of life my heart stop when I read flat line.
Cookie

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story misscookie. Stay tuned. Much more to come.
reply by misscookie on 26-Jun-2016
    Will do!
    Cookie
Comment from Sankey
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Great chapppter again. Really enjoying the background to the Sheriff and his old 'friend.' Now for some spags or suggestions whatever you think.

Rita's Rose Pe[d?](t?)al Diner.

two long time arch-nemes[i](e)s. I believe nemeses is the plural of one of these.

I put up an old poem about Reviews and lack of responses to same. Mainly to teach some new FS'ers a better way to treat reviewers. Not looking for anymore points as it already has a top award.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Appreciate the catches.

    Some times with me and this story about Cody I get so many reviews, and I really do appreciate every one of them, that it takes me a few days to respond to all of them.

    For instance, I have been replying for almost an hour and still have 45 more reviews to respond to.

    So hang in there. I always reply to every single review I receive.

    Cody is that popular on FanStory now.
Comment from Ricky1024
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Another fine chapter, Brett.
Bee-Bo or not to bw...
"That is the questuon?"
"And is Bee- Bo headed in the Right direction?"
"The clown can't hide forever?"
Ricky 1024
I've known a few "Be- Bos" in My lifetime.
Thanks,
Ricky 1024.

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 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    I believe we all have known some "Bee-Bo's" in our lives. Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Much more to come. So stay tuned.