Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

Wally's Trip to the Mall is a fun romp through the local mall with our favorite weasel. We see all the attractions a young person would appreciate, along with meeting up with friends. Fun reading.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thank you so much for this very nice review. 8-)

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is so very cute, my friend. I love the teeth like alligators. And of course the perfume always gets in the eyes. What a fun trip this was shopping with the two of you~Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thank you for these lovely comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed the shopping trip.

Wally has other adventures before this one. Gets a little more daring each time he tries something new. 8-)

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

Yes, I see ol' Wally. This is such a delightful poem! I want to read it to
my granddaughter tonight when she goes to bed. It's best read out
loud. Excellent rhyme and wonderful humor. Adults will need to find
their inner child to really appreciate this. -Bill

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thank you. What a lovely review. I'm so happy you like it. Please let me know how your granddaughter like it. 8-)

Comment from Lisa Deverick

Excellent

This is a really cute children's poem. Your words and lines flow wonderfully for the reader. What a fun story! well done

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you so much. I really appreciate you saying that. 8-)

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

I really enjoyed this piece. I was taken in by the first line and was looking forward to seeing where you were going to take this event. I loved the way you proceeded with the story and the ending was sublime. I actually liked the way the lines looked and perhaps you could do the same with the beginning? Very enjoyable.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

I might do that. Thank you for the suggestion.

I appreciate your review and the stars. I'm happy you enjoyed ready about Wally's shopping trip. 8-)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. The lines flow smoothly. Good job on the rhyme & storyline, too. You expressed this story from the POV of a young child, and it was believable. I like the escalator description as an alligator with teeth.

Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I appreciate the review and stars. 8-)

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That was such fun, Damommy, I do enjoy children's story poems. Wally Weasel does a lot of things and sees things through eyes that we don't. Which is very creative of you. Well done, I am sure kiddies will love this one. :) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you for this lovely review. Coming from you, it's a compliment indeed. 8-)

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

Haha lol. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear damommy! I love the playfulness of the poem and the humor is slightly naive and it works this way.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thank you. I'm glad it made you laugh. 8-)

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Exceptional

Oh my goodness, I love it.
Just perfect for children and older children like me.
I love the flow with the rhyming schemes you use and the piece on the escalator was fun to read...and he realized he liked it.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016

Thank you so much for saying so. I'm so happy when I hear my Wally stories make someone smile.

You've given me such a wonderful review, and all those stars! I really appreciate it.

I hope you enjoy the other Wally stories as well. 8-)

reply by Barb Hensongispsaca on 25-Jun-2016

they are a hoot...oops there goes my age

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

Nice little poem for kids. It should be read aloud.
Escalator teeth...yikes
I was always afraid to step on...
Will I be pulled under the stairs?
Good job.
Xxxxxxx

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016

I know it happens sometimes.

I'm happy you like this. Thank you so much. 8-)