Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

So true Janet. They suffer over and over. Society can be a cruel teacher when it comes to life and human nature. Her
innocence was taken advantage of and her only crime was trusting a man to be a gentleman. Good job my friend. :<) Nancy

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you Nancy for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Crennan87

Excellent

This is such a heartbreaking story. You did a wonderful job writing about a topic so horrible and evil. Thank you for sharing this with us! I wish you the best!

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This is a powerful poem. The rhyme feels natural and unforced and the tempo is good, making this a very smooth read. You dealt with the subject matter tastefully and still made a very strong point

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you Douglas for your thoughtful and encouraging review.

Blessings
Janet