A Strange Dream
A plea for brotherhood for all humanity42 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
Fabulous as usual. Worth six stars but sadly I have none left. Your poems portray such clear messages. You are one of my favourite poets. Blessings. Jen.
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Fabulous as usual. Worth six stars but sadly I have none left. Your poems portray such clear messages. You are one of my favourite poets. Blessings. Jen.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2019
Comment from phil nelson
Again you have created a lovely and thought provoking poem to please any reader, and to make one think of how we might be judged both against and in harmony with our fellow man. Thank you for this excellent insight to a piece of our consciousness.
All the Best!
phil
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Again you have created a lovely and thought provoking poem to please any reader, and to make one think of how we might be judged both against and in harmony with our fellow man. Thank you for this excellent insight to a piece of our consciousness.
All the Best!
phil
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
Comment from Heather Knight
It is a lovely poem and I like the story it tells. I'm not surprised you won second place.
I'm sure God doesn't care about our religion. He just wants us to be good.
Thanks for sharing.
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It is a lovely poem and I like the story it tells. I'm not surprised you won second place.
I'm sure God doesn't care about our religion. He just wants us to be good.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
Comment from Louise Michelle
I really like how you wrote this as a dream and it's quite a commentary on the fact that all humans are part of God's creation and in the afterlife it doesn't matter which religion they followed. Regards, Lou
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I really like how you wrote this as a dream and it's quite a commentary on the fact that all humans are part of God's creation and in the afterlife it doesn't matter which religion they followed. Regards, Lou
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
Comment from susand3022
Hi Jaybird. I like this poem a lot, and I'll tell you why... it just goes to show what I'm always saying... I don't really think God cares what you call him, just that you're a good person and you do good things with your life.
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Hi Jaybird. I like this poem a lot, and I'll tell you why... it just goes to show what I'm always saying... I don't really think God cares what you call him, just that you're a good person and you do good things with your life.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
A wonderful poem, Jay. I think God knows our heart. If we're human we all make mistakes and he knows that. Your poem is written and rhymed well. Marilyn
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A wonderful poem, Jay. I think God knows our heart. If we're human we all make mistakes and he knows that. Your poem is written and rhymed well. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your faith poem, Jay. I like the rhymes and the message. You portrayed the dream well with great words of imagery. Your words flow well with a great story. The notes are informative. It would be great for that to happen. Congratulations on the earlier win. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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I enjoyed your faith poem, Jay. I like the rhymes and the message. You portrayed the dream well with great words of imagery. Your words flow well with a great story. The notes are informative. It would be great for that to happen. Congratulations on the earlier win. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
Comment from mancub
This is a beautiful and spiritual poem, The message you share is one many may ponder in their minds, the acceptance of God when it"s time. the flow of your words is graceful and this has a perfect rhyme which makes it easy to follow and read, Yo express the faith in God and the wonders of his acceptance with imagery as your words are strong and sincere, your thoughts and emotions are sincere and strong embracing the belief you have and delivering it with a solid heart felt impact. very nicely done, I am certain many will truly enjoy this, Thank you for sharing and have a Blessed day, Mancub
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This is a beautiful and spiritual poem, The message you share is one many may ponder in their minds, the acceptance of God when it"s time. the flow of your words is graceful and this has a perfect rhyme which makes it easy to follow and read, Yo express the faith in God and the wonders of his acceptance with imagery as your words are strong and sincere, your thoughts and emotions are sincere and strong embracing the belief you have and delivering it with a solid heart felt impact. very nicely done, I am certain many will truly enjoy this, Thank you for sharing and have a Blessed day, Mancub
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Jay,
Well yes, I would presume if there is judgment it would incorporate all aspects of one's behavior. Anyone can repeat words of any religion to gain a pass, but faith without works is futile, in my opinion. Thanks for sharing and congrats on this piece placing in the contest. Jan :-)
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Hi Jay,
Well yes, I would presume if there is judgment it would incorporate all aspects of one's behavior. Anyone can repeat words of any religion to gain a pass, but faith without works is futile, in my opinion. Thanks for sharing and congrats on this piece placing in the contest. Jan :-)
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
Comment from misscookie
I love the words to your write
It captured my attention from the start
I find it strange we humans even in our dreams still fear if God will let us through those pearly gates.
This is what I call a food for thought poem ...mm mm
Cookie
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I love the words to your write
It captured my attention from the start
I find it strange we humans even in our dreams still fear if God will let us through those pearly gates.
This is what I call a food for thought poem ...mm mm
Cookie
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
