Comment from brownies

Exceptional

I love it! So creative and brilliant! You maintained an overall theme of travel with the thoughts within self. When I think of all of these places I have pondered or wandered into, I felt like you brought those thoughts into a new light of helping someone have more positive thinking...and when positive thinking won't take over, then drinking is always an option. Well done!!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thank you so much for this great review I really appreciate your thoughts and your time. The six stars are very welcome. Best regards Linda.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well written. Certainly a marvellous theme, I've never been to any of these "places" you've mentioned in your sometimes rhyming free verse, it is a matter of great speculation as to whether I would actually go there or not! But well done, the delicately scribed work is excellent, and entertaining,I wish more were as lighthearted as yours, excellent work, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thank you Roy for such a glowing review. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem. Best regards Linda.

reply by royowen on 16-Jun-2016

My pleasure Linda,

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

How wonderfully cheeky this is!! I love when writers play
with the language :-)

Turning adjectives into destinations was so entertaining
and clever.

Great write Linda :-)

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thank you for your very kind review. I really appreciate it. Best regards Linda.

Comment from Lisa Deverick

Excellent

This is one of the most original poems I have read in quite a while... and I love originality! I enjoyed the entire poem- wonderful wordage throughout! well done!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thank you Lisa for such a kind review. I really appreciate it. Best regards Linda.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Is this poem about dedication to others and being around other cultures they are just as dedicated as all? I also felt as if you are going with the flow and being carried from place to place and when the breeze comes again you will be there to be taken to the next spot. Either way this is really wonderful.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hahaha...good stuff, Linda, heh-heh.
Ya know, whenever someone makes a comment to me about something they're doing which they feel might be irritating me, like: "I'm sooooo sorry, Dean, I know I'm probably driving you crazy!" I simply smile and tell them in response, 'Well, look on the bright side. You don't have too far to drive.'

This was very funny, and well rhymed, Linda.
Thanks for the laugh today!
~Dean

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thank you Dean for this entertaining review. I am so glad it made you laugh. Best regards Linda.

Comment from Slythytove2

Excellent

Clever, witty, and not overdone. It would have been so easy to go overboard but
you've made this a memorable piece by taking the high road or restraint. A good job and a fun read. Seems I was sleeping when I went through those places.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for your kind review, I really appreciate you taking the time. Best regards Linda.

reply by Slythytove2 on 16-Jun-2016

You're welcome.

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This is more than clever, Linda. And it is really creative. LOL - I can't decide which stanza I like the best. How in the world did you think of this? A very fun read

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thank you Douglas for your great comments, They are very much appreciated. Best regards Linda.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Linda, This is so funny and I am so glad I read it. You made me laugh this morning. I won't jump to conclusions, but I must say I think with this kind of thinking you could well do stand up comedy. Good jod. Patricia

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thank you Patricia for reading and reviewing my poem. I really appreciate your kind comments. Best regards Linda.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute poem you have penned. It is humorous but yet has a lot of truth to it. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Teri

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thanks Teri for taking the time to read my poem. Thanks also for the kind review, Best regards Linda.