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Comment from P1
very well written and thought
provoking pieced of poetry
i could relate to your words and
your interpretation of days and feelings
very clearly. pleasure to read and review
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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very well written and thought
provoking pieced of poetry
i could relate to your words and
your interpretation of days and feelings
very clearly. pleasure to read and review
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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thank you so much. The good and evil in the world teach us what we need to learn about living. No life is perfect but it is worth living. Thanks so much.
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
Very poetic but very easy to understand at the same time. I can identify with every single verse. What a boatload of inspiration you must have received to have penned that. Interesting picture you found too. It's just excellent from beginning to end, and I think speaks a lot of us out here, "trying to find our way".
GoodHearted Woman
Marcia
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Very poetic but very easy to understand at the same time. I can identify with every single verse. What a boatload of inspiration you must have received to have penned that. Interesting picture you found too. It's just excellent from beginning to end, and I think speaks a lot of us out here, "trying to find our way".
GoodHearted Woman
Marcia
Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Thank you it is from a challenge in the forum group. join us next week.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Bravo! THis is superb! I like how you have divided the poem into parts of life, and the ending, with death, is touching and bold. Great job... you have captured his style well. :)
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Bravo! THis is superb! I like how you have divided the poem into parts of life, and the ending, with death, is touching and bold. Great job... you have captured his style well. :)
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Thank you Phyllis , I enjoy free verse. I have learned so much on this site and I love the challenges you give us.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. We live our lives from day to day. Some days we can't understand our feelings and other days we are there for everyone else helping them solve their problems. The day we when we die, we will know if we lived a good life.
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A very well-written poem. We live our lives from day to day. Some days we can't understand our feelings and other days we are there for everyone else helping them solve their problems. The day we when we die, we will know if we lived a good life.
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2016
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Thank you . Yes all days are different and they all need to be cherished. Even the sad ones.
