A Princely Dilemma.
The search for a bride.28 total reviews
Comment from foxangie123
So the lad was happy and when he found princess Kay right? I'm glad his family made him so happy and found him the right girl. What a neat poem. Wow.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016
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So the lad was happy and when he found princess Kay right? I'm glad his family made him so happy and found him the right girl. What a neat poem. Wow.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016
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How have you got this so wrong. There is no princess Kay. His family did not find any girl. Did you read the poem before reviewing? I think not.
Comment from chcbeck
This is great, made me laugh all the way thorough. Great story with a great ending especially "I'd rather have a talking frog" Great fairy tale poem with a twist.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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This is great, made me laugh all the way thorough. Great story with a great ending especially "I'd rather have a talking frog" Great fairy tale poem with a twist.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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I´m so glad it made you laugh, thanks for your kind words. Best regards Linda.
Comment from P1
ha ha this is really well written
a modern day fairy tale told through
poetry. your rhyme scheme was excellent
and itt's a pleasure to review your words
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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ha ha this is really well written
a modern day fairy tale told through
poetry. your rhyme scheme was excellent
and itt's a pleasure to review your words
Comment Written 07-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much for your kind review. Best regards Linda.
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Cute and funny. But what of the secret male lover? In the last verse--you your too ugly--should be you're too ugly.
Stories in a poem are always great entertainment. Stay with the theme. You do a good job.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Cute and funny. But what of the secret male lover? In the last verse--you your too ugly--should be you're too ugly.
Stories in a poem are always great entertainment. Stay with the theme. You do a good job.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, your words are really appreciated. Best regards Linda.
Comment from royowen
Very funny in fact hilarious, the whole articulate, rhyming creation was worthwhile and very entertaining to pursue its very clever and parodious trip to the imaginative end, was worth the read, well done, a great take on the original, good one, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Very funny in fact hilarious, the whole articulate, rhyming creation was worthwhile and very entertaining to pursue its very clever and parodious trip to the imaginative end, was worth the read, well done, a great take on the original, good one, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 07-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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thank you for this wonderful review, I really appreciate your kind words. Best regards Linda.
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Well done
Comment from William Ross
haha, A fun and witty write on finding the gay prince a bride who in the end wanted a talking frog instead of a princess write fun read and story. enjoy your day
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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haha, A fun and witty write on finding the gay prince a bride who in the end wanted a talking frog instead of a princess write fun read and story. enjoy your day
Comment Written 07-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Thank you so much for your kind review, It is really appreciated. Best regards Linda
Comment from Pollyana83
I really enjoyed this read. It was like reading a story and I could imagine the scene in my head. I could imagine Rik Mayall reading it in Grim Tales as it's almost a bit twisted that he keeps her as a frog at the end.
It made me giggle inside. Thanks.
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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I really enjoyed this read. It was like reading a story and I could imagine the scene in my head. I could imagine Rik Mayall reading it in Grim Tales as it's almost a bit twisted that he keeps her as a frog at the end.
It made me giggle inside. Thanks.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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I'm so glad you enjoyed my fractured fairytale..Thank you for your kind review I appreciate that you took the time. Best regards Linda
Comment from Douglas Paul
Good rhyme and flow in this one. This is very creative and your sense of humor shines through. I love your closing stanza. This was a fun read, Linda
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Good rhyme and flow in this one. This is very creative and your sense of humor shines through. I love your closing stanza. This was a fun read, Linda
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to review my poem. Best regards Linda
