Comment from Lisa Deverick

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your whimsical tale. I love the humor in this and you have created funny characters. There is a bit of roughness to the flow but your rhyme and story are great.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Thanks Lisa, Yes after further readings the flow can be uneven. Repairs may be necessary. Best regards Linda

reply by Lisa Deverick on 08-Jun-2016

I would love to read any changes- it is a wonderful poem and will be a great one if a couple of rough edges are smothed out just a bit:)
Have a happy day friend

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Dilemma? Sounds great to me. The prince, Kay, and Froggy living blissfully together until they croak-what's not to like? But then I have lived in Obama's America...

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Haha your comments are funnier than my poem. Thanks for reading. Best regards Linda.

Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Excellent

You made me laugh throughout this quite entertaining piece of poetry. It is funny that not the King nor any of his Knights, except for Sir Kay, knew he was gay. Everyone trying to find the prince a wife. I love how Sir Epilogue brought him a talking frog and refused to kiss it. The last two lines says it all, "I don't need a wife I've got a dog, I'd rather have a talking frog."

Linda you have done an excellent job in composing this excellent poem.

Have a great day,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Thanks Jim for a great review and for taking the time to read my work. If I made you laugh, then I have achieved my goal. Best regards Linda.

Comment from rbutner

Excellent

I like this, but I will say I found myself wondering what happened in the prince's search for true love! The flow was very good, and my interest was caught from the beginning. Note, there is a type in "you're" in the 4th from last line :) Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Ah, the prince had already found his true love. It was Sir Kay. Thanks for the read and review, much appreciated. Best regards Linda

Comment from Kooky Clown

Excellent

I loved this poem it made me smile and then laugh out loud what great fun rhyme I just think it is great fun and a joy to read. Well done I am going to read it again as I enjoyed it so much. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Thank you so much for such an encouraging review, I´m so glad it had the desired effect and made you laugh. Best regards Linda.

Comment from scd41

Excellent

The prince was a gay! LOL. You penned this humorous poem of bride hunting by the king without his knowing that the prince had already a knight. At the end, I had a few guffaws.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Thank you very much for reading my poem and reviewing it with such perfect understanding of the story. I appreciate it so much. Best regards Linda.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

Haha. Lol. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear linda! I love the sarcasm, it is the wittiest form of humor.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Thank you so much for your kind review. I'm so glad that you enjoyed my poem. Best regards Linda

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A well-written poem. The otherwise if the story of the princess and the frog. The princess took a chance by kissing the frog. But the prince have no desire to find a beautiful princess. He already has a knight.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Thank you Sandra for reading and reviewing my poem. I appreciate your time. Bes tregards Linda

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

LOL You crack me up .... so funny. Sometimes frogs make better partners than men.

What happened to her sex partner?

I like your poem because it has a story. It was a lot fun to read. Well done!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Thank you for your kind review, it is very much appreciated. Best regards Linda

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

omgoodness too funny!! great job with the imagery!! I get a perfect picture in my mind!! love the last line.."I'd rather have a talking frog!!" LOL that's funny! :) enjoyed reading

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

I'm so glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate it. Best regards Linda.