Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Hi
Me two, well i preffer a cat and. A talking frog would be unjque, i was with my ex since i was 17 at the end of 2014 in december, he decided he wanted to be a tran and be aith a guy older then my mums boyfriend who offered him 20k towards his ffs/ srs surgery and wjthin 12 months has had his srs surgery, my poor mother n law had 2 sons and 1 daughtdr, now has 3 daughters...i feel sorry for her, my kids. are still ajusting, crazy world we live in.


Thanks for your wonderful poem, hillarious, great job
Very well enjoyed

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016

OMG. How on earth did you cope? You must be a very strong woman to have coped with this life changing event. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and I hope it helped to cheer you up. Bless you and your children. Hugs :-)Linda

Comment from ESchmitz

Exceptional

Excellent. Serious, then funny... (Intentionally I hope) nice form a-b-a-b-c-c. The last two lines being blunt yet comical made for a very enjoyable little read. Love it.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016

Thank you for the great review and the six stars. Both are very much appreciated. Best regards Linda.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hahaha, I can't say as I blame the good king one bit, Linda.
Speaking purely from a man who's been wronged perspective, first of all, pets are infinitely, far and away more loyal than a woman could ever HOPE to be. They don't ask for much, they love you unconditionally, and in many cases our pets act as if they worship the very ground we walk on.
Not so for the ladies, fair.
Second, do you realize how much money could be made with a talking frog? Oh, I know all about that old Looney Tunes cartoon where the guy found a singing and dancing frog in a top hat who would only perform when no one else was looking but him. But this is different. This frog is obviously female, and there's NO WAY she could ever remain quiet in a crowded room.

In all serious this poem was very well written, wonderfully well rhymed, and funny as he...well... you know.
~Dean

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016

What a fun review and animation you have come up with here. Funnier than my poem I do find. Yes pets are indeed loyal and I'm sure all women aren't fickle, you were obviously unlucky. Thanks for the entertainment. Best regards Linda

reply by Dean Kuch on 10-Jun-2016

Yes, I was, Linda. Very unlucky.
Twice, LOL...
You're very welcome.
~Dean :)

Comment from L.lora

Excellent

You capture the reader right
off and hold on all the way through
your lines. Mesmerized, waiting to
see where this ride would take us--
we follow through to the end. Your
well chosen words weave a tale that
is delightful and it the end your
humorous wit a hoot, is the perfect
conclusion. Lora

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Thank you for this great review Lora. I'm so glad you liked my poem and that it made you smile. Job done!! Best regards Linda.

reply by L.lora on 09-Jun-2016

You are most welcome. Lora

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Lmao here. This is very funny and light-hearted work. I thoroughly enjoyed the read so much. Wasn't expecting that last verse. The last line is killer funny! Great job. Very good flow and the rhythm and rhyme are excellent! God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Thank you Susanne for this kind and encouraging review. It's always a pleasure to know I have given someone a good laugh. Bless you for reading. Best regards Linda.

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

That was very funny. I enjoyed your poem, and it made me laugh. I was originally drawn to it because I'm a fantasy writer, but this was funny. Rhyme scheme looked good.

Take care,
Russell

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Thank you so much for reading my poem and i'm so glad it made you laugh. I like fantasy, so I will look you up on FS. Best regards Linda.

Comment from Bill Schott

Exceptional

This is a most original and funny poem. From the interesting rhyme scheme, the engaging storyline, and the hilarious ending, your poem entertains and is one of the best I've read in awhile.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Thank you so much for such an uplifting review and the six stars are such a bonus. I appreciate both. Best regards Linda.

Comment from Word Junkie

Excellent

Lol,

I'd rather have a talking frog, too. This lighthearted poem gave me a much-needed chuckle. It's written well. Word choice throughout is excellent.

"I won't kiss you you'r too ugly"

Well done, and write on!
Lana

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Thank you for reading and your kind review, I really appreciate your comments. Best regards Linda.

Comment from joannakruk

Excellent

Haha one may say the Prince was wise in his request for the frog in lieu of a bride. At least the frog wouldn't argue with him. A fun piece, I wonder how many princes in our history had a similar secret withheld.
Thank you for sharing.
Jo :-)

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review Joanna. I really appreciate it. Best regards Linda.

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

LOL - a tale of Camelot newly discovered! Replete with talking frogs and
a gay Prince.

Seems to me the Prince had a very god answer for the flirtatious frog :-)
(The King it would seem, is in for some disappointing news on the Heir
to the Kingdom front!)

Fun poem to read :-)

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016

You are the first person to make the connection with names of the knights of the round table. Thanks for reading. Best regards Linda.