To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Truth in Dare"Poems by Michael
8 total reviews
Comment from Ronni
Hello Michael,
That kind of truth she should not have withheld from you and only to discover
it through someone else, indicated a lack of trust in you to be able to deal
with it, and a moral and marital vow and troth disgraced. Such personal
issues should be kept personal and private between a couple, period.
Respecting a spouse's right to know, and honoring that respect in trust
by being able to reveal it to them first and foremost.
Sadly, such ironies too often happen...after the fact...lesson to be learned
here indeed. Thanks for sharing it.
with/luv's/smiles/always, Ronni
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Hello Michael,
That kind of truth she should not have withheld from you and only to discover
it through someone else, indicated a lack of trust in you to be able to deal
with it, and a moral and marital vow and troth disgraced. Such personal
issues should be kept personal and private between a couple, period.
Respecting a spouse's right to know, and honoring that respect in trust
by being able to reveal it to them first and foremost.
Sadly, such ironies too often happen...after the fact...lesson to be learned
here indeed. Thanks for sharing it.
with/luv's/smiles/always, Ronni
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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ah history, experience, circumstance shape a humans ghosts...fears, perceptions of ourselves and that which surrounds us effects who we become...even if one day completely understood. for some the outer shell is all their worth. She didn't like to talk about her past....and to be honest I told it was hers the future mine. Its a long story...ah your right. love to you...Michael.
Comment from brenda bickers
HAHAHA,
this is so cool.
That shut her up didn't it. What a great way to find out you sweetheart is a fake.
I love your sense of humour. I am just hoping I have not put my foot in it. This is pretend right...!
Great read, had me laughing.
Brenda:))x
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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HAHAHA,
this is so cool.
That shut her up didn't it. What a great way to find out you sweetheart is a fake.
I love your sense of humour. I am just hoping I have not put my foot in it. This is pretend right...!
Great read, had me laughing.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Hi Brenda...-smile-
ha...yea she had a way of surprising me thats for sure.
naw...not on my part anyway. yea, I laugh at that incident now too. However some dishonesty just aint funny no matter how much time goes by. -smile- love to you...Michael
Comment from amada
Nice and fan story, dear friend. This is the first story I read from you and it was cute and sweet. The dialog was excellent, it kept the story going. Nice couple. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Nice and fan story, dear friend. This is the first story I read from you and it was cute and sweet. The dialog was excellent, it kept the story going. Nice couple. Best wishes.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Hi Happy...-smile-
yea we were once. thank you Dear...always good to see you...love to you...michael
Comment from Nika2016
Could not pass this one up...Some disguises are better than others...changing hair and make-up does the trick...Some disguises fail when prior knowledge is in hand...Truth in dare? Whom is daring whom in this dialogue and why would they? The paragraph beginning OMG has a hidden.meaning that confuses the reader..sorry, but it does...as it is incoherent. .
Again...a disguise does not work as a visual when words make the person apparent...Your dialogue works except for the noted problems so I gave a five...mostly for Springsteen...smile.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Could not pass this one up...Some disguises are better than others...changing hair and make-up does the trick...Some disguises fail when prior knowledge is in hand...Truth in dare? Whom is daring whom in this dialogue and why would they? The paragraph beginning OMG has a hidden.meaning that confuses the reader..sorry, but it does...as it is incoherent. .
Again...a disguise does not work as a visual when words make the person apparent...Your dialogue works except for the noted problems so I gave a five...mostly for Springsteen...smile.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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I see...
you certainly speak with authority.
Were you in counter intelligence and espionage all your life or just a part time occupation that afforded you "special" insight...?
Hm..."truth in dare"...is when I "dare" you to reveal the real "Nika2016" tell us about yourself...what you feel...how you feel it. write it Nika...let us know you inside and out. there's truth in dare. Michael.
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No counter-intelligence, but I have the degree for it. All I know is that a disguise will not hide actions which have been stated in a paper trail. What do you want to know, except my address, phone number...personal finances...? I am willing to disclose most things and have here, often, unlike some who hide behind multiple personalities and poetry. I hold no animosity toward anyone unless they enter my domain in a negative manner. I have had crazies on this site threaten my life in various ways and then ask to talk. I have had old men try to discuss their sexuality on personal terms..out-of-bounds...so what do YOU want to know?
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I think you have emotional issues.
I don't think any of what you just stated is true. Fact is I don't think you can tell the difference anymore. Nika...or whatever you call yourself today. Have a good life-
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One may not be able to prove an action, but one can certainly prove an intent to harm and this is enough for action on a different charge. A disguise will not prevent any of this. Just letting those know who have threatened harm. None of this should be happening to people who post on this site. The whole disguise thing irritated me. That is why I responded.
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It is all true and I have proof...I do not care how others view it...You have a good life too...
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Listen closely to me......you have done all you could . If you suppose you can do more...than do it. but...for your own sake as I've I said from the beginning....I wish you wouldn't. I dont want to hear your nonsense anymore...I'm sorry-
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I don't even know what you are talking about...
You wish I would not do what? Turn this site in?
I am telling you that if anything touches my family there will be repercussions from threats already made in direct messages AND poetry. Together they form a complete picture of what is going on here. The police are not as stupid as some think. You ask me not to do something and then call my words nonsense? My only actions would be to go to the police directly. I came to this site with an open heart to share and enjoy poetry. Period. What I received was someone's weird obdession that was directed towards me. Now, like I said...you cannot on one hand accuse me of nonsense while asking me not to take an action you do not explain. I am finished talking/wroting. I have done nothing to you or anyone else here, but review. I wish I could say the same for others. Writing from my phone..mistakes. Good night.
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Perps have ISP addresses too..and user names..and real names on PayPal..subpoena..This site is not anonymous as many think. Good-night again..
Comment from Liberty Justice
Five stars 5. WOW! What a surprise ending about the wife getting false tips. The husband seemed to have no idea what she was doing in the doctor's office. He was so utterly shocked and amazed. WELL DONE! Check mine out, also, today. liberty justice
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Five stars 5. WOW! What a surprise ending about the wife getting false tips. The husband seemed to have no idea what she was doing in the doctor's office. He was so utterly shocked and amazed. WELL DONE! Check mine out, also, today. liberty justice
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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No he always went with her. but yes he had no idea about the tits...truthfully its not that big a deal, I mean its not like your sucking on plastic or anything...its underneath, a sort of ballooned support. Well the shocking part came much later to be honest...-smile- thanks...love to you . Michael
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, what a cute husband and wife dialogue only story, Michael. I think if he didn't know his wife had implants the plastic surgeons must've done a fabulous job.
Great job with this and go and add your name into the posting Mikey put up so Ima can add you to the clickable links list.
Delightfully fun write.
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Ha, what a cute husband and wife dialogue only story, Michael. I think if he didn't know his wife had implants the plastic surgeons must've done a fabulous job.
Great job with this and go and add your name into the posting Mikey put up so Ima can add you to the clickable links list.
Delightfully fun write.
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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yes thats true...but beyond me why any woman would pay for tits that small....ahhaha...ahh well it was wing it memory G....remember I'm competeing with quick draw Cahil. ...Thank you Dear...big love-
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, ...I can just picture the expression on everyone's face...surprise...and the doctor...and Chau...everyone has things in their closet they just don't tell...everyone...some found out along the way...and some they take to their graves...that had of been a surprise...LOL...story very well told...something a bit different for you...well done...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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HI Michael, ...I can just picture the expression on everyone's face...surprise...and the doctor...and Chau...everyone has things in their closet they just don't tell...everyone...some found out along the way...and some they take to their graves...that had of been a surprise...LOL...story very well told...something a bit different for you...well done...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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yea it was awkward moment. Well, that maybe...but real love is bigger. I would have loved her anyway...maybe more. ahh long time now...-smile- yea, I suppose different for me around here...but wrote prose before I did poetry. Hope you're okay. love to you...Michael
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I know you would have Michael...yes real love is bigger...something felt deep in the heart...I know it is different for you now...I hope you and Emmy are okay as well...love and miss you both...love to you too...Linda xxoo
Comment from aryr
A delightful bit of sparring between a husband and wife. Your characters complimented each other in the dialogue which held one's interest. I enjoyed the surprise ending. Good writing, thank you.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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A delightful bit of sparring between a husband and wife. Your characters complimented each other in the dialogue which held one's interest. I enjoyed the surprise ending. Good writing, thank you.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Hi...-smile-
well thank you very much...this is true story so I suppose easier to write. Appreciate your time. love to you ...Michael
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you are very welcome.
