Comment from Sandra Montanino

Excellent

This little story is actually very cleverly written. In it, you explain the ins and out of haiku poetry. I think you should have entered it in a contest. Nice work!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019

Thanks, Sandra

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Wonderful I am glad to see that these two are still at it, there coo,coo, should be a ripper, perhaps you oughta show em how it's done, as said I love these characters, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019

Thanks, kahpot

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

lol Ned and Pons will just about try anything! lol This is a very cute and funny script with those two looking at Fanstory. You used very cute words and cute dialogue. Thanks for the laugh tonight! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019

Thanks, Teri

reply by Teri7 on 14-Jul-2019

you are so welcome Bill!

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Ha, ha. Try to explain haiku to a hillbilly or redneck.
A take on the jargon that goes along with most forms of poetry. Satori-- a name for roses. LOL

universal truth in a leopard's lick--- like any doofus would get that.


Great fun, Bill.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Thank you, Shari, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Bill,

Now this sounds very much like a conversation I may have down the pub at the end of a long, long night! LOL

very clever play on words throughout.
nice write
G

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016

Thank you, GM, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahaha, Bill, you are having a blast with this, and it is a really funny dialogue. So that is your take on FanStory! hmm... Ach well, it's all good fun. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Thank you, Ulla, for the positive review. Bill

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

LOL - this was so much fun to read. I'm wondering if you came across some people on Fan Story that made you think up this skit. Sometimes I come across people that I'm sure are drunk. At least I hope that's the excuse for some of the weird stuff I read around here. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Thank you, Louise, for the excellent review. I just imagined explaining it to one of my brothers and it flows out. Bill

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Bill,

You've written a witty script here!
Those two characters are a blast. Now I'm
confused about that haiku;)

I got a kick out of this line:

"Well I'd be pleased as punch to submit a poetical contrivance of my own"

Yeah, contrivance...sounds like me:)haha

I found this fun and entertaining to read.
Well done,
Linda

(Oh, thanks for using that art)

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Thank you, Linda, for giving this a look. I went looking in FanArt for an image and this popped up.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Too funny. Some people are so dumb that they suck the intelligence right out of you. Prompting you to retort, the more I teach you, the dumber I get.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016

Thank you, nomi, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

So Ned and Pons are at it again. Horror of horror, Pons is trying to explain the Haiku to Ned. If he ever succeeds, send him to me. Very entertaining, as usual. The only thing I didn't understand was the reference to a satori being an ancient word for roses. Still and all, a triumph of inanity, LOL.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

The previous line has Pons saying "rows of words" which Ned processes as word for rose. Thank you, Jay, for giving this a look. Bill