Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Hmmmmm.... Makes me wonder if one of those spells was the Lizard/gizzard, Newt tail, pork shoulder/ road Boulder recipe handed down by great aunt Cackling Sue. Ohhhh... She was a dear. Had thirteen husbands, but then, whose counting?

Haha! Good luck, dearie!!

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016

Thank you. I would like to hear a story about your great aunt. LOL! She sounds like quite a character.

Comment from Mary Wakeford

Excellent

Your title provided the need hook and the ensuing thoughts of a 'witch' certainly held the reader hostage. Although the character sounds a slight dangerous, I would definitely hang in for the read. Well done, just a few SPAG's noted:


prostitute's bed.I really didn't care -> spacing error following period

"Mam, we regret to inform you that your husband was killed in a freak accident. A huge rock rolled down -> Ma'am

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 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016

Thank you. I have edited and corrected the errors you mentioned. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.