Comment from MirandaDJ

Excellent

I enjoyed the humor in this poem, that was written in high, old English. It has a pleasant rhyme and rhythm. I enjoyed the contrast of a humorous poem in such prim and proper English. Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you, Miranda, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

I liked the way your turned mustard gas into Mustarghast. A cleverly written story/poem that could apply to my dog (we leave the room.) When farts do fly Molly Mustarghast will not catch your eye, rather she would attract a hoard of fly! Hee, Hee.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you, Aussie, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahaha! G'day Bill. Very funny stuff here mate. Beautifully rhymed and the flow is exceptionally done Sir. No wonder the coppers haven't got her yet lol. Well done.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016

Thank you, Fez, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Great name for this unfortunate lady. If only someone had told her about Beano. Excellent rhyme in this, and I do admire the use of olfact'ry. I think it best that she was allowed to stay free--maybe a nice place in the country for her. They would not want to put her in prison, as she would no doubt start a riot. Excellent poem. judi

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016

Thank you, Judi, for the excellent review. Bill

reply by judiverse on 04-Jun-2016

You're very welcome. A fun poem. judi

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is well written and entertaining. I like your rhyme scheme. Good alliteration in the title. Thank you for sharing this entertaining piece, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016

Thank you, Debbie, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Now that sounds like a weapon of mass destruction if ever there was one! What a rip-snorter! I loved your subtle play on 'mustard gas' with this lethal old lady's name!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016

Thank you, Tony, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Sounds like a bean eater to me. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016

Thank you, Charlie, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from brownies

Excellent

How fun! I wonder how many stories you shared with your fellow Marines! I grew up with three brothers 2 of whom are Marine veterans. I will enjoy sharing this one with them. Good job!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016

Thank you, brownies, for the excellent review. The stories I shared shouldn't be printed. Semper Fi. Bill

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Bill, this is absolutely hysterical~! Love it! Excellent rhythm, rhyme and flow. I really enjoyed the read. Poor woman...what a problem she has. Great job! God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016

Thank you, Susanne, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from CDyer

Excellent

Bwahahahaaaa! Have your students seen this one? Even your title creates imagery - like "Good golly, Miss Molly" and "Mustard Gas"! To think of flatulence as debauchery
punishable by arrest, but then left alone due to the excessiveness of the crime - well, that's just hilarious.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016

Thank you, CD, for the excellent review. Bill