Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Teri, I really enjoyed this. I just noticed a couple of small nits...made Jesus (his) ..second paragraph hopping in his car instead of hoping. Very enjoyable

 Comment Written 30-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thank you for the great review. I did fix that. hugs, Teri

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Relationships are not date coded. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.

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 Comment Written 30-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thank you Charlie. hugs, Teri

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Teri, this is a beautiful story about the love of Christians for each other. I enjoyed reading it very much. Good luck in the contest. Patricia

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 Comment Written 30-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

Thank you my friend. hugs, Teri