Texas Dream Catcher
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Comment from boxergirl
Comfort food...haha...I remember those end of school days!
Tension is building...anytime you have someone following you and not know their intentions!! Good stuff! :-)
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Comfort food...haha...I remember those end of school days!
Tension is building...anytime you have someone following you and not know their intentions!! Good stuff! :-)
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review. I am into cheeseburgers and ice cream. Can't get enough of either. Diet will start 6/6/16. I''ll celebrate with food over the weekend.
Comment from judiverse
Another great chapter. There's a lot of tension in this as Soni and Jim speculate about the vehicle following them. It followed them to the diner, and then it follows them to the mall where Soni plans to do her shopping. It's suspenseful to think about what they might be up to. They haven't been very careful to try to avoid detection, but maybe part of the plan is just to let them know they're being watched. Soni suggests it could be Jim that they're interested in. Will Soni take Jim's advice and stay in the store? She's not known for following orders. Lots of excitement in this. judi
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Another great chapter. There's a lot of tension in this as Soni and Jim speculate about the vehicle following them. It followed them to the diner, and then it follows them to the mall where Soni plans to do her shopping. It's suspenseful to think about what they might be up to. They haven't been very careful to try to avoid detection, but maybe part of the plan is just to let them know they're being watched. Soni suggests it could be Jim that they're interested in. Will Soni take Jim's advice and stay in the store? She's not known for following orders. Lots of excitement in this. judi
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You're welcome. You are adept at creating some new element of suspense in every post. judi
Comment from create4christ
This is good...though I wish I'd read the first 27 chapters, so I'd know what's going on. Why are they being followed? Are they detectives or something? I'll have to go back and read your other postings. This is well done, though. I'm easily drawn into your story.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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This is good...though I wish I'd read the first 27 chapters, so I'd know what's going on. Why are they being followed? Are they detectives or something? I'll have to go back and read your other postings. This is well done, though. I'm easily drawn into your story.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review. I'd love to give you the quick review of the story, but I don't think there is for this story. Jim is and ICE agent and Soni is a large ranch owner. I35 goes right through the middle of her ranch. It's a large drug route. We're not sure who the bad guy is, yet. There's some issues over ownership of her ranch, that's just come out.
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No problem. Is it on here? I'll go check it out.
Comment from Sankey
Had to do another SIX! Exciting chapter again. Glad Soni has her weaponry on board. Jim probably does too, so far, anyway. Just one spag or spellcheck error. Jim sca[mm](nn)ed the inside of Soni's SUV.
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Had to do another SIX! Exciting chapter again. Glad Soni has her weaponry on board. Jim probably does too, so far, anyway. Just one spag or spellcheck error. Jim sca[mm](nn)ed the inside of Soni's SUV.
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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I will fix that typo ASAP. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ciliverde
The show down is coming!! I can feel it. You will get there, and I don't blame you for going for comfort foods. I enjoyed the touches of humor you used here, along with the most serious issue of who those people in the blue SUV are. Surely they mean Soni and Jim harm.
Great job,
Carol
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reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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The show down is coming!! I can feel it. You will get there, and I don't blame you for going for comfort foods. I enjoyed the touches of humor you used here, along with the most serious issue of who those people in the blue SUV are. Surely they mean Soni and Jim harm.
Great job,
Carol
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Comment Written 29-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging review.
Comment from c_lucas
The ending may be near, but life has a bad habit of interfering. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, makin for a very good read.
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When do you plan (on) eating it?
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The ending may be near, but life has a bad habit of interfering. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, makin for a very good read.
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When do you plan (on) eating it?
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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I will fix that ASAP. Thank you for catching it.
