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Comment from BeasPeas
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Somehow I missed this one, Chrissy. Congratulations on winning the contest with this amusing poem. Well done. All poem is entertaining and well written, but I particularly enjoyed the part at Siamese cats. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2016
    Hi Marilyn, Thanks so much for your review sand lovely words .I have been off line for a few weeks as my internet at home is not working as we are renovating and have had some power failures and it has interrupted my internet and phone so I am sorry to be so long in replying. I hope to be back soon and do some more poetry and read everyones work I do miss you all I am sending this from my work computer so Cheers and catch you soon
    Christine
reply by BeasPeas on 08-Jul-2016
    Okay, Chrissy. I hope you are on-line again soon. Good luck with your renovating. That's always exciting, despite the mess. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016
    hi Marilyn yes back on line have lots to catch up on may take a while New kitchen fabulous love it LOL cheers Christine x
reply by BeasPeas on 11-Jul-2016
    Congrats on your new kitchen, Chrissy. I don't want to cook anymore--take me out instead. :) Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016
    Hi Marilyn Oh I have missed this site and my friends from it . lovely to hear from you and do come over I will cook for you Ha Ha Cheers C
Comment from Lovinia
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Hi Chrissy

Your poem is exceptional and a worthy winner. I had no idea this contest was on, I don't think anything I could write would match yours. You've covered every aspect of the sweet kitty Cat, you seem to know her rather well. I'm sure she'd agree. :))

Excellent presentation, to give us the complete package. She is one-off for sure. LOL I expect she loved your accolade. Well done. I've enjoyed very much. Sorry I missed the voting. I'm going to say that old one liner - "I wish I had a six". :))) Warm regards - Lovinia xoxo

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
    Hi Lovinia, I truly thank you for your lovely review and comments fo my Cat poem it was fun to write and I think Cat was quite pleased and i was thrilled with the win. your Fives are lovely anyway so many thanks for your thoughts ? cheers to you for a great day Cheristine😀
Comment from GeraldS
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Congratulations on winning your contest! I don't read a lot of poetry but I enjoyed your tribute to cats. I think your narrative would resonate well with anyone who had up-close and personal experience with a cat. They often seem independent and aloof, but a lot of personality is hidden inside their outward facade.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
    Hi GeraldS, Thank you very much I appreciate your time to read my poem and am thrilled with you six star rating and lovely comments. This poem is actually about our number one poet author I am Cat who is very interesting and writes some terrific poems. She is very versatile and I tried to match her personality to the various Cats in this poem. So your comments are spot on as shes is independent has a lot of personalities hidden in her facade I like this description it suits her well. Many Cheers for reading my work and for your congratualtions Cheristine🐱
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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I can certainly see how this WON the contest, Chrissy710! Love the artwork ... it really draws the reader in. Your poem does it justice and you create and present a clever write for your reader and a nice tribute to I Am Cat. My favourite line is: "and with her pen she steals your mind" ... love that!!

She is a 'one-off' breed ... one-of breed?

A great poem!

Connie

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016
    Hi Connie many thanks for readind andreviewing my Cat poem and for you lovely comments and congratulations for this. i had fun thinking up all the different Cats that represented some og out Cats qualities. LOL and yes she is a 'one off breed ( means like no other in the dictionary ) and a term we would use here in Australia. Many Cheers to you Christine😃
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
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Chrissy--everything is so perfect about this poem--the message, the humor, the meter and rhyme. It was a total joy to read and I read it four times and will read it five or six. Her life is often in turmoil where the emphasis is on the tur. This is an easy fix--put turmoil earlier (i.e. her turmoil is the xxxx xxxx kind) 2) She'll say her piece: MEOW! it out. Right # of syllables right. And last, did you mean a one-off breed or a one-of breed. You being the cat's mama would know that right away.
Very nice work, beautiful presentation, and wish you scads of luck!
Good Hearted Woman Marcia

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2016
    Hi GHW thank you so much fir your very kind and generous review i am touched you liked it so much I think Cat was pleased Ans so was i with a win for the contest too LOL I will look at that line i meant she is a one off unique Ha Ha well she is Many Cheers for your lovely words Cheers Christine
Comment from Lynette Marie
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Your poem made me smile. I love cats, and your thoughts comparing I Am Cat are beautiful. I love the picture and your coordinating color choices. Congrats on your win!

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2016
    Hi Lynette, Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my poem for the I am Cat contest and for your congratulations for the win. I had a bit of fun with this one and so glad you like my colour scheme as well. I thought the image also suited our Cat. Many Cheers Christine
Comment from Mary Wakeford
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A fantastic poem honoring a fantastic poet on the site who I have read and admired from time to time. Congratulations on the win! It was well deserved. I love how you incorporated all the characteristics of the feline into a personal bio for Cat, and my favorite line, though there are many, is:
And with her pen she steals your mind
with words that are profound

 Comment Written 31-May-2016


reply by the author on 31-May-2016
    Hi Mary. Thank you so much for your congratulations and your review for my Cat poem I enjoyed writing this and am thrilled to win and yes her words are very profound at times I am honoured Cheers Christine
Comment from nomi338
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Congratulations. You win hands down. Your entry is without doubt the best of the lot. they are all good, but yours is best.

 Comment Written 31-May-2016


reply by the author on 31-May-2016
    Hi nomi338. Thank you so much for your fabulous review and comment and congraulations. What a nice thing to say and you have made my day. Yes the poems for Cat were all good and I feel priviledged to have won being in such good company. Cheers Christine😃😃
Comment from sage17611
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Your poem has a very nice flow
which makes it easy to read. The
rhyming is good making the words
read like a song. This is a very well
thought out and written poem, you
wrote a lot of nice compliments to
Cat that I'm sure she would appreciate.
Thanks for sharing, good luck with the
contest.

 Comment Written 31-May-2016


reply by the author on 31-May-2016
    Hi sage17611. Thank you very much forcyour lovely review for my Cat tribute. I was fun to write a d she did like it .thanks also for your good luck message Cheers to you
Comment from Lynn27
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This is a charming poem about your cat. I enjoyed reading this your piece. I'm a cat owner too. You caught your cat's personality well in this. The photo was a perfect choice.

Lynn

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 31-May-2016
    Hi Lyn. I thank you so much for your great review and six stars you have made my day. smiling😃 I wrote the poem and the found the image and thought yes that was the one. I am so pleased you like this . I think Cat was pleased too Cheers for a great day