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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Scene at the Home Depot"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
7 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Bill,
This was an enjoyable slice of nonsense. Good playing on words throughout!
Ned: Getting' yer ashes hauled in the process? - either delete the 'g' or the apostrophe here.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 31-May-2016
Hi Bill,
This was an enjoyable slice of nonsense. Good playing on words throughout!
Ned: Getting' yer ashes hauled in the process? - either delete the 'g' or the apostrophe here.
All the best
G
Comment Written 31-May-2016
reply by the author on 31-May-2016
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Thank you, gm, for the kind review and the check on the apostrophe. Bill
Comment from krys123
Hi Bill;
-thanks for really having me have an enjoyable time and humorous wanted that. That Ned really has a one track mind and I do not mean railroads. Chuckle!
-I truly enjoy your writing Bill and as I said before was very entertaining by a well-written piece of comedy.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
Hi Bill;
-thanks for really having me have an enjoyable time and humorous wanted that. That Ned really has a one track mind and I do not mean railroads. Chuckle!
-I truly enjoy your writing Bill and as I said before was very entertaining by a well-written piece of comedy.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Thank you, Alex, for the excellent review. Glad the lads could give you a laugh.
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You are so welcome my friend.
Alex
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahahahaha...
It's great to see that Pons and Ned have decided to make a reappearance Bill. I was beginning to wonder what those two had been up to lately.
Now, I know, LOL.
Thanks for the laugh. I really needed one today.
~Dean :}
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
Hahahahaha...
It's great to see that Pons and Ned have decided to make a reappearance Bill. I was beginning to wonder what those two had been up to lately.
Now, I know, LOL.
Thanks for the laugh. I really needed one today.
~Dean :}
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Thank you, Dean, for the positive review. Glad the boys could make you smile. Bill
Comment from Jay Squires
Doesn't matter if it's Home Depot or a ski resort, Ned and Pons are going to continue speaking their own language, and through it all seem to understand each other in a crazy kind of way, and all with enough contact with reality that the reader understands, then worries that he does.
Good Job, Bill.
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
Doesn't matter if it's Home Depot or a ski resort, Ned and Pons are going to continue speaking their own language, and through it all seem to understand each other in a crazy kind of way, and all with enough contact with reality that the reader understands, then worries that he does.
Good Job, Bill.
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Thank you, Jay, for the positive review. You are my favorite audience. Bill
Comment from Galactia
Hi
You have some hardworking labouroes LOL. Well if the ladies don't love this, the guys are ceetainly.
Great job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
Hi
You have some hardworking labouroes LOL. Well if the ladies don't love this, the guys are ceetainly.
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Thank you, G, for the positive review. Bill
Comment from robyn corum
Bill,
This is sexist and perverted and all man-ish....and I loved it. heeheeheehee The humor was very humorous and had me smiling all the way through. Though I don't think I'd want to KNOW this guy, it was fun READING about him. *smile*
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
Bill,
This is sexist and perverted and all man-ish....and I loved it. heeheeheehee The humor was very humorous and had me smiling all the way through. Though I don't think I'd want to KNOW this guy, it was fun READING about him. *smile*
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Thank you, Robyn, for the excellent review. I wondered if I should warn about Ned's tendencies toward the burlesque.
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nah.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Scene at the Home Depot Is a unique one-act play that could have been in a Home Depot near you. I must confess I have never seen anything like this take place at the home depot near me. Truth is, you just never know what may be said when two men get together! LOL . Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
Scene at the Home Depot Is a unique one-act play that could have been in a Home Depot near you. I must confess I have never seen anything like this take place at the home depot near me. Truth is, you just never know what may be said when two men get together! LOL . Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Thank you, Doc, for the positive review. I doubt that anyone is like Ned, anywhere.
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. Well to be honest, Bill, I think there probably are some meds out there. Thankfully I don't run into a bunch of them LOL you are most welcome!
Embrace the love from above!