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Greyson

Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "May 27, 2016"
poems and stories about my grandson and family

13 total reviews 
Comment from Dean Kuch
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A lovely little offering to share with us all concerning your time spent with your grandson, Greyson.
Very nice, Teri/Teresa...
~Dean

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thank you Dean. You can call me whichever you prefer. i answer to both. lol Teri
reply by Dean Kuch on 30-May-2016
    You're very welcome, "T".
    Happy Memorial day to you & yours.
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Comment from Unspoken94
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I feel like I'm reading your journal. We have a three year old
granddaughter that we watch 3-4 times a week. It's the highlight
of our lives. She calls me Popi. They will be moving to Colorado
in July and then we will be in such grief. Thanks for the day with
Greyson. -Bill

 Comment Written 29-May-2016


reply by the author on 29-May-2016
    Thank you Bill. I will be praying for you as I know it would break my heart if they took him far way from us. we watch him Mon - Fri. They do grow on you, don't they! hugs, Teri
Comment from BeasPeas
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I DID enjoy reading about your day with Greyson, Teri. Our grandchildren bring us such joy. We are lucky to be living close by to enjoy them. Marilyn

 Comment Written 29-May-2016


reply by the author on 29-May-2016
    Thank you my friend. i do feel very blessed. hugs, Teri
Comment from GeraldS
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I enjoyed your little story. It reminded me of time spent with my youngest grandson (he'll be 3 in a couple of days). He lives out-of-state, but we get to babysit him from time to time. He is very active and requires our full attention. And after about three days all my energy is gone. He's just like the Energizer bunny; he just keeps going and going and going.

 Comment Written 29-May-2016


reply by the author on 29-May-2016
    Thank you for the review. your grandson sounds adorable too. hugs, Teri
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Sounds like another enjoyable day with Greyson, and although we hate to see them, we have to expect a few tears every now and then. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 29-May-2016


reply by the author on 29-May-2016
    Thank you for the great review. Teri
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Teri,

You are a blessed woman for sure and your writing brought me a smile.
I think you were very clever to distract Greyson with your pretty new shirt.
I used that technique as well. Wow, we are smart.

Your writing is perfect...I see no errors, but I was more caught up in the
of the list of TV shows, sherbet, pbj sandwiches and Gus the dog. lol

I've missed these and they will make a beautiful book of memoirs.

Linda

 Comment Written 28-May-2016


reply by the author on 28-May-2016
    My friend you always manage to make me smile when you review my work. Thank you.You are very special to me always. hugs, Teri
reply by AnnaLinda on 28-May-2016
    And you are special to me too.
    I really did miss you...And Greyson too;)
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
    Thank you for your heart of love and for loving me and Greyson
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Teri

= Ahhh, poor little Greyson. So hard to see them upset.
= Of course, PB&J is a nice remedy, along with Grandma's hugs. (*<*)
= Thank you for sharing your day with Greyson.

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 Comment Written 28-May-2016


reply by the author on 28-May-2016
    Thank you for the great review. hugs, Teri
Comment from damommy
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Another good story of Greyson's day. I know you're very happy!

You might consider a couple of changes:

the rainbow sherbet to Greyson and ME.

He decided to follow me to where the T.V. was - could be shortened to "He followed me to the TV." Makes reading smoother.

Thanks for sharing. 8-)

 Comment Written 28-May-2016


reply by the author on 28-May-2016
    Thank you. hugs, Teri
Comment from patcelaw
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Teri, it is always fun as usual to read of your precious moments with Greyson. Enjoy that little fellow as long as you can, because it won't be long before he is a grown man. Blessings for a great weekend. Patricia

 Comment Written 28-May-2016


reply by the author on 28-May-2016
    Thank you my friend. hugs, Teri
Comment from c_lucas
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Toddlers have a fear of being away from their parents. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 28-May-2016


reply by the author on 28-May-2016
    Thank you my friend. He does call for his mom and dad during the day. he is a true joy. Teri