Comment from royowen

Excellent

So where to from here Rhonda? Ahmed believes he's either reincarnated or the natural successor to Akhenaten, the capture of poor Sally and enforced incarceration of Bunker Hill, daredevils is really exciting, the good thing is we know they will get out, just how is the question, well done, exciting stuff, Roy

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 Comment Written 29-May-2016

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reply by the author on 29-May-2016

Thank you, Roy. Yes, they will get out, or they wouldn't be at the school telling the story. But, like you said, how? And what will they learn, because that's what these stories are about at the end of the day...a way to teach children values.
I appreciate the review,
Rhonda

reply by royowen on 29-May-2016

Exciting stuff Rhonda,

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

I liked this chapter, Rhonda. The major question you left us with is a good one - Is Ahmed really "Akhenaten II, returned from the grave, reborn and renewed.", or is he delusional? I am looking forward to finding out


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 Comment Written 29-May-2016

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reply by the author on 29-May-2016

Actually, Douglas, he's a bit of both, but don't tell him, he's got a horrible superiority complex!
Thanks for the review, my friend,
Rhonda