Comment from krys123

Excellent

Good for you Roy;
- I wish you all the best on your vacationing trip and you going to Bali is especially that which I'm happy for you. Enjoy your family and in law and I hope everything goes as planned.
- again your writing is done with a prestige of masterfulness and the happiness that it brings me was even more fun to read. Order is always good that one hit person here at fan story is going to have some fun for themselves and their family.
- of course your rhyming is always perfect again and your meter is quite fine but I'm not going to even talk about that.
- but my friend and enjoy with all your heart.
- thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks Alex, my friend, , for your great review, and lovely thoughts, see you when I get back, blessings. Roy

reply by krys123 on 26-May-2016

Take care my good friend.
Alex

reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks Alex

Comment from Stephanie Kastner

Excellent

You are a very lucky fellow! I hear Bali is beautiful! Enjoy it! My husband and I just returned from a trip to Costa Rica. It was only 6 days because that's all the time we could be away from our children and schedules, but it was delightful. I like how you write of your departure in a poem. We'll benefit when you get back and post of your adventures!

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks Stephanie, for your great review, and lovely thoughts, see you when I get back, blessings. Roy

Comment from Gone but not forgotten

Excellent

Well, have a great time! I'm not even a beach person and I love hearing all the fun things you've got planned, including naps!! Love naps. Those are mini vacations in and of themselves. What a nice long vacay! Enjoy!

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks, for your great review, and lovely thoughts, see you when I get back, I love naps too, beside the pool, sweet dreams! blessings. Roy

Comment from jaho58

Excellent

Loved this! Very creative way to put us on notice. This was very educational (for me at least) to learn facts about Bali.

I really liked: rellie (is that original?) ; and Bali Bard

As always, good rhythm and rhyming pairs.

May you and your family be blessed with this visit!

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks, for your great review, and lovely thoughts, see you when I get back, "rellle" is a little Aussieism blessings. Roy

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Roy,

I enjoyed reading your upbeat poem about your upcoming trip to Bali.
How nice that you will be able to get together with a large portion of
your family while enjoying the warm weather there.

Your poem has a nice flow to it with good rhyme and I hope you have
a safe and very pleasurable holiday.

Linda

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks Linda, for your great review, and lovely thoughts, see you when I get back, not my family Linda, my son in law's family, oh and my granddaughter's blessings. Roy

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Oh, have a great time in Bali! I heard it's real paradise. Enjoy your well deserved vacation. Loved your beautiful rhymes, flow and the imagery of the whole peace.

I wish I could come too! (smile)

Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks so much for these lovely, empathetic words and pleasing review, I'm grateful, and please come next time. blessings, Roy

Comment from candyfink

Excellent

I hope you enjoy your vacation .........vacations are peaceful and help the creativity flow.......... enjoy your vacation ........ best wishes to you

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks so much for these lovely, empathetic words and pleasing review, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

This vacation sounds like a winner Royowen, I hope you all have a grand time sitting on the shores relaxing and eating some good food. Your planned trip sounds so relaxing and tempting. I like your poem explaining your vacation and planned activities, it's very well written with a nice flow, and the rhyming is flawless. An enjoyable read, have fun!

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks so much for these lovely, empathetic words and pleasing review, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I know envy is a sin, Roy, but, oh I do so envy you! There is no way my back would be able to travel that far by plane, and a cruise from England would cost the earth! But, leaving my sinful envy aside, have a brilliant holiday, my friend, you and your family. And stay safe. :) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks so much Sandra, for these lovely, empathetic words and pleasing review, I'm grateful, and you are forgiven, I have trouble when people don't take me with them! blessings, Roy

Comment from ciliverde

Excellent

The minute I saw the title of this poem I was FILLED with envy, Roy -- so you're off to Bali? How fantastic! How very wonderful that you will be traveling with family for a nice, long stay in paradise. We'll be expecting some tropical paradise-inspired verse from you, my friend, upon your return.
Have a great time!!!
hugs,
Carol

 Comment Written 26-May-2016

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reply by the author on 26-May-2016

Thanks so much Carol, for these lovely empathetic words and pleasing review, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy