We're off to Bali...
Holidays in Paradise.113 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
Oh roy, that's wonderful. What a great place to vacation
and relax with family.
I love that you told us of your plans in poem form,
with excellent rhyme and meter.
Have a great time!
Nancy
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
Oh roy, that's wonderful. What a great place to vacation
and relax with family.
I love that you told us of your plans in poem form,
with excellent rhyme and meter.
Have a great time!
Nancy
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Thanks Nancy for your well wishes and very kind review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Oatmeal
R.O,
Well chosen words are expressive. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. The flow is smooth. Very enchanted atmosphere, non-judgmental, thought provoking, very enjoyable and thrilling.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
You wrote this one very well.
Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
R.O,
Well chosen words are expressive. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. The flow is smooth. Very enchanted atmosphere, non-judgmental, thought provoking, very enjoyable and thrilling.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
You wrote this one very well.
Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Thanks For these lovely words, and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Ooo, you lucky person! How fabulous. Rellies. Haven't heard that in a while! :)
What a nice way of telling us you'll be off for a while. I should imagine you'll find inspiration in such a beautiful place.
I don't envy you. Well, not much. Okay, a bit. Yeah. I envy you!
Have fun!
Av
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
Ooo, you lucky person! How fabulous. Rellies. Haven't heard that in a while! :)
What a nice way of telling us you'll be off for a while. I should imagine you'll find inspiration in such a beautiful place.
I don't envy you. Well, not much. Okay, a bit. Yeah. I envy you!
Have fun!
Av
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Thanks For these lovely words, and great review, and the best wishes, Heh, Heh, blessings, Roy
Comment from Liberty Justice
Five 5 stars to you dear poet. Is this picture from Bali. Is this a house on the ocean? This view is so mesmerizing and enchanting like something out of a fairy tale book. I love way poet enjoys his dream vacation. Nice! Check mine out also. liberty justice
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
Five 5 stars to you dear poet. Is this picture from Bali. Is this a house on the ocean? This view is so mesmerizing and enchanting like something out of a fairy tale book. I love way poet enjoys his dream vacation. Nice! Check mine out also. liberty justice
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Thanks For these lovely words, and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Word Junkie
Hi Roy,
This is sweet. What a great way to let people know you'll be away for a spell. I hope you have a wonderful vacation.
And, don't forget to write!
Peace,
Lana
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
Hi Roy,
This is sweet. What a great way to let people know you'll be away for a spell. I hope you have a wonderful vacation.
And, don't forget to write!
Peace,
Lana
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Thanks Lana, For these lovely words, and great review, see you soon, blessings, Roy
Comment from Kooky Clown
I enjoyed this though I am kind of jealous that you you should be sunning yourself in Bali while I am getting ready to visit the dentist. Anyway a good poem with a certain ring to it to make all jealous.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
I enjoyed this though I am kind of jealous that you you should be sunning yourself in Bali while I am getting ready to visit the dentist. Anyway a good poem with a certain ring to it to make all jealous.
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Thanks For these lovely words, and great review, and the best wishes, blessings, Roy
Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel
What a fun way to announce your upcoming vacation. I wish you long and restful days basking in sunshine with your loved ones. The tone, meter and rhyme here are exactly the excellent quality we have all come to expect from any of your offerings. Take care and have a grand adventure. -CtVR
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
What a fun way to announce your upcoming vacation. I wish you long and restful days basking in sunshine with your loved ones. The tone, meter and rhyme here are exactly the excellent quality we have all come to expect from any of your offerings. Take care and have a grand adventure. -CtVR
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Thanks For these lovely words, and great review, and the best wishes, blessings, Roy
Comment from Ulla
Hi Roy, I wish you and your family a wonderful time in Bali. It is indeed a beautiful place. I am looking forward to hear about it, when you are back here on site. Happy holidays. As usual a lovely written poem to tell us all. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
Hi Roy, I wish you and your family a wonderful time in Bali. It is indeed a beautiful place. I am looking forward to hear about it, when you are back here on site. Happy holidays. As usual a lovely written poem to tell us all. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Thanks Ulla, For these lovely words, and great review, and the best wishes, blessings, Roy
Comment from Autumn Splendour
What a lovely place to go for a holiday. Bali is replete with sun, sea, and is rich in culture and the arts. But what makes a holiday memorable is also the company.
A deviation from your usual spiritual poems but still well written for its cadence and rhythm.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
What a lovely place to go for a holiday. Bali is replete with sun, sea, and is rich in culture and the arts. But what makes a holiday memorable is also the company.
A deviation from your usual spiritual poems but still well written for its cadence and rhythm.
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Thanks For these lovely words, and great review, and the best wishes, blessings, Roy
Comment from I am Cat
Oh Roy, May I go with you? PLLLLLLLEEEEEEASSSE? LOL
I NEEEEEED a vacation! lol
I'll be quiet, you won't even know i"m there, I promise!
I loved your poem, and I've never been to Bali... I wanna go! :(
Don't be stingy, come on, share the love! ;)
Hugs and love to you and Elaine and have an awesome time with grand kids, kids,... everyone! And TRY to bring back some sand for me. LOL
Mwah
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
Oh Roy, May I go with you? PLLLLLLLEEEEEEASSSE? LOL
I NEEEEEED a vacation! lol
I'll be quiet, you won't even know i"m there, I promise!
I loved your poem, and I've never been to Bali... I wanna go! :(
Don't be stingy, come on, share the love! ;)
Hugs and love to you and Elaine and have an awesome time with grand kids, kids,... everyone! And TRY to bring back some sand for me. LOL
Mwah
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Ha ha thanks Cat, I'm sure you'll get one,thanks dear friend for your great review, Roy.