Comment from Almahar826

Excellent

I really love this Spider Web acrostic poem you have written! I must tell you I do believe I have seen several others on spider webs poetry but yours so far is the best one!! Good luck with this, I think it will do well!!

 Comment Written 25-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

What a lovely review, thank you so much, Almahar, I really appreciate your words, and that you enjoyed it. Thank you! xsx Sandra

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

You did well with this as an acrostic. I too am not a spider lover. I found the picture a bit of a challenge too. Have a blessed day, Sandra.

 Comment Written 25-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

I tried to write a straight poem, but nothing came, so decided to go this way. At least the first letter was written for me! LOL. Thanks, Patricia. You have a great day too! xsx Sandra

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

A wonderful acrostic for the picture this prompt, spider webs full of dew are magnificent to see in the morning - you can avoid them then. Thank you for sharing. I think the second last line should be 'every one' meaning each of them.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 25-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Thank you so much, John, for your lovely review. Before replying to you, I made a quick dash back and corrected the word 'everyone' to every one. Thanks for that!! xsx Sandra

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

If we humans were as talented craftsmen as the spider, we would never weave such tangled webs, catching nothing but ourselves in so many awkward situations. Thanks for another of your fine poems. :-)

 Comment Written 25-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

The spider is so disliked, yet it does an awful lot of good. Without them in our gardens, we would be inundated with flies in the house. And they really are master craftsmen when it comes to making those webs. Thank you, Ric, for another of your wonderful reviews. :) Sandra xx

Comment from create4christ

Excellent

This is a very good acrostic. I really like your rhymes and your rhythm throughout. You have described the spider web intricately, so that the reader can see it in their minds eye. Awesome!! Of course, your acrostic structure is also great.

Done well. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 25-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Thank you so much. I'm delighted you enjoyed my take on the picture. :) Sandra

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

I like your interpretation of the art this time, Sandra. I found this picture to be challenging too. You did a good job on this poem. I especially liked....

Spiders webs are works of art
Produced with care each perfect part

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 Comment Written 25-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Thank you, Douglas, it took a long time before anything came, and when it didn't I thought about the acrostic. At least I had something to work with, lol! Thanks again, my friend xsx Sandra