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A Book of Songs

Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "The Lucky Six"
Metre ... Ballads & Slant Rhyme

4 total reviews 
Comment from tbacha58
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Well, here I come first time to read your poem, and i was so thrilled to discover more as you really made me so happy to read a poem with the wonderful rhyming that i love, and the thrilling subject of the poem. Good luck of your book. Terry xoxo My six is offered as your poem deserves it so much.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
    thank you.
Comment from Amsterdam
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Then pen is mighty
Every sword grows weak
Truth is too mighty
But

Too hard too see

As long as there's fighting

We will Never see Peace.

Royal Blue vs. Who?

The red blooded.

Might be seen as Tiny-
But we'll tie up their Feet.


Great write , Bicpen.
Good to see you again..

am

 Comment Written 24-May-2016

reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    The truth is out there
    but
    when it is within
    no one
    can steal or change it

    Keep the Peace
    and James
    the Royal Blue
    will guide
    YOU.

    ... M ... i.
reply by the author on 31-May-2016
    ... M ...i. continue.
Comment from yoel1
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Alright. I see the champions in flight. Does crows have red blood or is man that is affected by taking flight, seeing and speaking what has been and will be to there last breathe.

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
    cool ...
Comment from foxangie123
Excellent
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This was a most profound and amazing write. The font is border line small to read on this end and I would make it larger so this Phenominal piece doesn't get passed up.

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
    cool ...