Mesh
Picture This Challenge29 total reviews
Comment from Hayley Solomon
Wow, Amada,this is good.
I think we share a similar love of language and twining
words delicately to create a perfectly fabricated vision.
This is wonderfully evocative, and yet not verbose
Love the simplicity that expresses so much
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016
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Wow, Amada,this is good.
I think we share a similar love of language and twining
words delicately to create a perfectly fabricated vision.
This is wonderfully evocative, and yet not verbose
Love the simplicity that expresses so much
Comment Written 27-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016
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Thank you reading this work and for your positive and enlightening comments. It makes my day!
Comment from Joan E.
I am pleased the picture motivated you to create an inspirational poem. I admired your contrast between "cages" and "frees" and your resonating "inner child". Well done! -Joan
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
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I am pleased the picture motivated you to create an inspirational poem. I admired your contrast between "cages" and "frees" and your resonating "inner child". Well done! -Joan
Comment Written 25-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
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Thank you, dear friend.
Comment from fionageorge
Amada, such a wonderful and thought provoking 'Picture this Challenge' poem. Great imagery created with your well crafted words. I thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Amada, such a wonderful and thought provoking 'Picture this Challenge' poem. Great imagery created with your well crafted words. I thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written 01-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Thank you for reading my work and your warm regards, Marijke.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A very short and simple poem, but profound too. A unique take on the Picture This challenge artwork. Well done, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016
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A very short and simple poem, but profound too. A unique take on the Picture This challenge artwork. Well done, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016
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Thank you for this very very lovely review written on May 30. Sorry for the delay.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work went well with this poem. hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016
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This is a very interesting poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work went well with this poem. hugs, Teri
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016
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Thank you for this lovely review written on May 28. Gee...how time flies!
Comment from heyjude
Amada, Very well written poem to go with the challenge picture.
This is an interesting poem where it talks about the mesh the
web that cages or it can free.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016
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Amada, Very well written poem to go with the challenge picture.
This is an interesting poem where it talks about the mesh the
web that cages or it can free.
Comment Written 26-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016
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Thank you heyjude for this great review written to me on May 26. Time flies...! I so appreciate your lines.
Comment from dmt1967
Most of the poems I have read concerning this poem are long but, although yours is short it says so much. I like the points made and the way they were written. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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Most of the poems I have read concerning this poem are long but, although yours is short it says so much. I like the points made and the way they were written. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-May-2016
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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Thank you for your encouraging comments.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Amada. I apologize for being so late to review your Picture This poem. I had to euthanize one of my dogs and it's taken me away from FanStory for a few days. Feeling a bit better now. I like that you have compared the web to mesh. There is an order to the threads even though we don't see them at the time. I enjoyed reading your post for this one. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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Hi Amada. I apologize for being so late to review your Picture This poem. I had to euthanize one of my dogs and it's taken me away from FanStory for a few days. Feeling a bit better now. I like that you have compared the web to mesh. There is an order to the threads even though we don't see them at the time. I enjoyed reading your post for this one. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-May-2016
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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I', sorry, Marilyn, for the loss of one of your dogs. They are special and loyal friends. Thank you for commenting in my Mesh here. Best wishes.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A well-written poem on this spider web. A short but powerful interpretation a long thread gleaming in the sun knitted together for a purpose.
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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A well-written poem on this spider web. A short but powerful interpretation a long thread gleaming in the sun knitted together for a purpose.
Comment Written 26-May-2016
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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Thank you for your encouraging words.
Comment from misscookie
Your words were a perfect match for the picture.
This is what I call a food for thought poem... meaning after you read it you go mm
Thank you for sharing.
Cooke
reply by the author on 25-May-2016
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Your words were a perfect match for the picture.
This is what I call a food for thought poem... meaning after you read it you go mm
Thank you for sharing.
Cooke
Comment Written 25-May-2016
reply by the author on 25-May-2016
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Thank you dear friend.
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You're very welcome.
Have a nice day.
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