Comment from bubblejellybean

Excellent

So cute! I love it! Very well written and I really enjoyed the cut scenes between the three friends. I wonder what their back story is! I didn't see anything that needed to be changed. Your writing is very good!

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Thanks ever so much. I'm glad you liked it. All the best.Ulla:)

Comment from Nan Beeson

Exceptional

Hi Ulla,

I loved the title right off the bat and it made me wonder about my old friends. I remember in school that Evelyn, Dorothy and Lupe were inseparable. I often wondered why the connection? Also three other friends I knew: Rochan, Claire, and Gloria. I often wonder what happened to them, as also three friends I worked with at Universal Studios confessed to me that they were actually real witches. They are the ones I would be most anxious to know how their lives turned out. I am looking forward to reading part Two in the morning.

All the best,
Nan:))

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Ahh Nan, how sweet is this. Thank you so much. You do warm my heart. So my story reminds you of old friends of yours? I like that. I do hope though that the Audrey in my story will not be one of them. All the best. Ulla:)))

reply by Nan Beeson on 26-May-2016

Thank you for your response, Ulla. I was not at the computer yesterday, so hopefully your last two chapters will be ready to read today.

The best always,
Nan:))

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This is a great start to a longer story. The description of the women reading the invitation set the feeling of tension without giving away too much. The personality and visualization of Audrey is described while leaving that of the other two women for later. You left me curious which is just what you would want.

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Thank you so much, seaglass,for this great review. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

Interesting story! I like. :)

Notes:

She didn't quite recognise it(.) Something about the letters, however, was vaguely familiar. - suggestion to tighten up the narrative. Take or leave! :)

She'd made sure to (suggest 'mail' or 'post' rather than 'send') the invitation far from where she lived

Audrey lifted her glass saluting the table. The scene was set. - Indeed it is! And my curiosity is peaked, too! Look forward to finding out where you're going with this, Ulla.

Well done! :)

Av

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Hi Av, thanks ever so much and I have of course made the changes. I so appreciate the corrections from which I learn. I'm also pleased that you like the story so far. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Well, now I'm hooked.

Three friends who now almost hate each other. Hmmm. What happened to cause that? And isn't it funny how she envisions the others as frumpy. I bet she gets a surprise.

I can hardly wait for the next installment to see what comes of the meeting. Good writing, and good hooking the interest of the reader. 8-)

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Thanks so very much. I'm so glad that you like it. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

This sounds very intriguing, Ulla, I had thought it was more of 'your' story, but I do like this one too. Part one of three? Well, as Audrey said, the stage is set, now for the action, but what? I look forward to reading just what Audrey is up to. Great start, my friend. xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Thank you so much Sandra. I'm glad you liked it. More of my story is to come but sometimes I feel like writing fiction. All the best. Ulla xxx

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Well, I must say that you have me primed with the suspense of what is on Audrey's mind and what will happen next. As it would appear to me, Audrey is not the still the same person that the guests will be expecting to meet there. Times and people do change. Of course, I'm guessing. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Hi Ric, thanks so much and for your great comments. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks also for your continuing support. So appreciated. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from candyfink

Excellent

Your writing is always peaceful with a nice flow so that the reader can relate to the characters......... even through your writing you seem like a sweetheart.

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Ahhh, Candy, what a sweet thing to say. I'm so pleased. Thanks so much for your lovely comments. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

I the curiosity of your characters is felt by the reader. A great read with a good pace and sense of intrigue. I am really looking forward to read more. Find out the intentions of this meeting.

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Thanks so much for this great review. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Ulla,

Very good opening sequence you have penned here. Setting the scene well, but leaving the circumstances for such clouded in mystery at this juncture.

Susan turned the card over, but there was no more. The envelope didn't reveal anything either. - to me, this felt a little out of place. She'd already read the card so knew this to be the case. This is info for the reader but feels strange in this context.

All the best
G

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Thanks so much. G, I'd had a thought about what you are saying, and I'm looking into it. All the best. Ulla:)))