Comment from kriver

Excellent

Hi Roy,
This is an interesting poem.
The 2nd line the word (their)= people
needs to be changed to (There)=place
I like the reference notes to scripture.
Over all it is a good write.
Best regards,
K River

 Comment Written 25-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Thanks,, your encouragement and uplifting review they are much appreciated I changed it, thank you blessings, Roy

Comment from VaV-VOOM

Excellent

Well now that was pretty cool, thank you very much for sharing such a great poem. I liked "Securing treasures -- building dams, we should be grasping truth like lambs." The best. Sometimes I wonder how some people can put out poem after poem. It takes me forever t put out just one. Great poem. Write On! VaV-VOOM!

 Comment Written 24-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thanks for these encouraging words and great review, blessings, Roy

reply by VaV-VOOM on 25-May-2016

Your so welcome Roy. VaV-VOOM!

Comment from poetsteve15

Exceptional

Very will done! Great picture to go along side of it.
keep the good work.
I can see that you are a person of faith, it shows in you words.
Very nicely done...

 Comment Written 24-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thanks Steve for these super words and most encouraging review, and exceptional rating, my gratitude, blessings, Roy

Comment from LanceHill

Excellent

Very beautiful Roy. I am ready for the mansion Christ is preparing for me. To many cannot comprehend Salvation is a simple free gift and therefore fight against it. Thanks for sharing. God bless my friend.

 Comment Written 24-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Me too Lance, Thanks for these encouraging words and great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, royowen, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the way eternity is a concept we cannot fully understand until we're there, great imagery presented here. I enjoyed reading this one.

 Comment Written 24-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thanks Pam, for these encouraging words and great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

A nicely written poem about man's need to put limits on what God has made to be limitless, like opportunity, His live, His forgiveness.
A nice poem to give us pause to ponder.

Well done,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 24-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thanks Rhonda, for these encouraging words and great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from CivilChick

Excellent

This is a very thought-provoking poem. I enjoyed reading if for the rhyming, flow, as well as content. Edit: second line should be there, not their.

 Comment Written 24-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thanks for these encouraging words and great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from infinityyingyang

Exceptional

Another great one Roy. I loved the message and meaning behind this and it was very well written with a great thought provoking flow to it.

 Comment Written 24-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thanks for these super words and wonderfully encouraging review, and exceptional rating, blessings, Roy

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Excellent poem. Impeccable rhythm and rhyme and awesome content. A very inspiration poem that makes the reader stop and question exactly where they are going in this life and death! Loved it. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 24-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thanks Susanne, for these encouraging words and great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from hhalapin19

Exceptional

This is so well written. Very eloquently worded and the way all of the pieces blend together to make one harmonious thought/message is just dazzling. An exquisite piece I would recommend to all avid readers and writers as a prime example of what writing should be.

 Comment Written 24-May-2016

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reply by the author on 24-May-2016

Thanks for these wonderful words and greatly uplifting review, and exceptional rating, I'm grateful, blessings, Roy