To Last Forever
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Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, I think you did a great job on the 5-7-5 challenge...these are hard to make speak...and you did......beautifully written...always in your own unique way...love your poem...and love Bruce Springsteen's music... love you Linda...xxoo
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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HI Michael, I think you did a great job on the 5-7-5 challenge...these are hard to make speak...and you did......beautifully written...always in your own unique way...love your poem...and love Bruce Springsteen's music... love you Linda...xxoo
Comment Written 21-May-2016
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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Hello Linda...-smile-
yes well I would have been embarrassed if not for "potlatch"...-smile- hm...well that's sounds like go to hell to me. I hope you feel better. love Michael
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you shouldn't be embarrassed...it is a form of the poem...and as I said you made it speak...I'm sorry you feel that way...no!!! I don't feel better...xxoo love Linda
Comment from Gloria ....
I rather like this one quite a bit reconciled. My sense is that you have a smouldering coal for someone and as soon as that comes into a full burn, you are gonna be ready for some love.
I always love those old Bruce Springsteen songs. He wrote what he lived.
Great job.
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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I rather like this one quite a bit reconciled. My sense is that you have a smouldering coal for someone and as soon as that comes into a full burn, you are gonna be ready for some love.
I always love those old Bruce Springsteen songs. He wrote what he lived.
Great job.
Gloria
Comment Written 21-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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hmm well for someone who's bought and paid for this one...you sure pretending formal G...I think we know each other well enough to whisper Michael....over and over again....-smile-...ahaha...thank you Dear. you make me happy. love Michael
Comment from LisaD123
This is an interesting and very well-presented poem. The ideas are cleverly presented and the structure is very cleverly created. I particularly enjoyed the choice of language and the use of alliteration. Excellent choice of song to accompany the poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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This is an interesting and very well-presented poem. The ideas are cleverly presented and the structure is very cleverly created. I particularly enjoyed the choice of language and the use of alliteration. Excellent choice of song to accompany the poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Hi Lisa...-smile-...well interesting is easy when you live it...so it comes out natural...I have plenty of fiber in my diet...-smile-...haha thank you sweet Lady. love Michael....because if you dont really...who will...?
Comment from c_lucas
One never knows what the day will bring. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
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reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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One never knows what the day will bring. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
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Comment Written 21-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Hello Charlie...-smile-...well around here lately...I got a pretty good guess. haha thank you Bro. l.ove Michael
Comment from Dr. Nad
Scripture is a very challenging piece for me. I am somewhat reticent to acknowledge when something flies over my head. I will confess that this one has done that completely. One thing I'm very confident of though is that it is very good for those understand it, because you have written it. You are an excellent poet, with abilities far beyond my own. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
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reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Scripture is a very challenging piece for me. I am somewhat reticent to acknowledge when something flies over my head. I will confess that this one has done that completely. One thing I'm very confident of though is that it is very good for those understand it, because you have written it. You are an excellent poet, with abilities far beyond my own. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
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Comment Written 21-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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ah I don't do a lot of 575's...not sure why i'm here now...-smile-...I said I would be so...this is my offering to the "potlatch" Saturday night shindig...its supposed to be about fire....I'm on fire....-shouldershrug-...anyway...I hear ya doc....love Michael
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You are most welcome.
Embrace the love from above!
