Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

This is a very funny Witty Epitaph writing prompt entry. this entry is unlike the others in that you allow us to see the work of God with a humorous touch. Great job with the poem and the picture. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 22-May-2016

Thank you for your kind words...

reply by Dr. Nad on 22-May-2016

You are most welcome.
Embrace the love from above!

Comment from JennC

Good

Nice job. This was a clever presentation on a more weighty topic, which I can appreciate. A few of the lines felt as though they needed the number of syllables adjusted to flow more smoothly or sound less forced, but overall, I think you did a good job with this. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Thank you!

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

This is very well-penned and thought out. It is a great entry for the Witty Epitaph contest. Wish you great luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Thank you, and hugs back! :)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your witty epitaph. Good job with the prompt. I like your rhyming couplets. Your lines flow well and tell a great story.

Your picture is perfect to accompany your well written words.

Good job and best wishes in the contest. You wrote a thought-provoking poem.

Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Thank you for your kind comments!

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Very nice and very witty. Way to go on this. Wow-ah my friend. Creative brilliance right here. I love it as it is clever and brilliantly flowed. Awesome.

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 21-May-2016

Thank you, very kind of you to comment so accurately! :)