haiku (fragrant magnolia)
Spring 5-7-559 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent 5/7/5 for the 5/7/5 spring contest entry. I like the theme of flowers and your syllable count is perfect. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
  |
Excellent 5/7/5 for the 5/7/5 spring contest entry. I like the theme of flowers and your syllable count is perfect. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2016
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
-
Thank you, Vypsy Blue Rose, for your review and comments for my poem. I truly am grateful you took the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Thank you!
Comment from sunnilicious
Enjoyable poem to read. Good alliteration with F, S & M words. Well thought out and nicely written. ALso, you met the syllable count requirements. Good accompanying artwork. Good luck in the contest. Goodnight.
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
 |
Enjoyable poem to read. Good alliteration with F, S & M words. Well thought out and nicely written. ALso, you met the syllable count requirements. Good accompanying artwork. Good luck in the contest. Goodnight.
Comment Written 15-May-2016
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
-
Thank you so much for your generous rating and wonderful review for my poem, Sunnilicious. I truly appreciate your encouraging comments and kind words. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, and thanks for your kind good luck wish in the contest. Thanks!
Comment from Rookette
This is such a beautiful entry for the contest. Indeed Magnolias are beautiful! Oh how I've waited for spring!!! Great job on this 5-7-5. It's difficult to say much with so little but you did it and did it well!
xoLeslie
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
|
This is such a beautiful entry for the contest. Indeed Magnolias are beautiful! Oh how I've waited for spring!!! Great job on this 5-7-5. It's difficult to say much with so little but you did it and did it well!
xoLeslie
Comment Written 14-May-2016
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
-
Thank you, Leslie, for your great review and encouraging comments for my poem. I truly am grateful you took the time to read and share your kind words. I'm delighted you enjoyed it, and I sure agree with you about waiting for spring to get here!
Thank you!
Comment from tony bronk
I like how you handled your third line. I am learning more about the magic of the third line here on FS. The poem is refreshing and beautiful. Tony Bronk Wisconsin
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
|
I like how you handled your third line. I am learning more about the magic of the third line here on FS. The poem is refreshing and beautiful. Tony Bronk Wisconsin
Comment Written 14-May-2016
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
-
Thank you, Tony
, for your great review and comments for my poem. I truly am grateful you took the time to read and share your kind words. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Thank you!
Comment from seaglass
I also pronounce it, (mag-nol-ya). These flowering trees are so fragrant, they deserve a poem. Your poem brings the olfactory experience to the reader with a minimum use of words.
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
|
I also pronounce it, (mag-nol-ya). These flowering trees are so fragrant, they deserve a poem. Your poem brings the olfactory experience to the reader with a minimum use of words.
Comment Written 14-May-2016
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
-
Thank you, zeaglass, for your great review and comments for my poem. I truly am grateful you took the time to read and share your kind words. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Thank you!
Comment from Dr. Nad
fragrant magnolia Is a wonderful 575 about spring writing prompt entry. You took me back to Mississippi through the beauty of the picture you incorporated And the wafting of the literary exquisiteness that is your poem. thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
|
fragrant magnolia Is a wonderful 575 about spring writing prompt entry. You took me back to Mississippi through the beauty of the picture you incorporated And the wafting of the literary exquisiteness that is your poem. thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
Comment Written 14-May-2016
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
-
Thank you, Dr. Nad, for your great review and comments for my poem. I truly am grateful you took the time to read and share your kind words. Thank you!
-
You are most welcome.
Embrace the love from above!
Comment from mfowler
Ah, Magnolia. What a beautiful plant, what delicious flowers. This excellent haiku really reminds and links to memory of scent and beauty. The satori line gives connection to memory and place. A delightful addition to the imagery in line 1 and two. Excellent entry. Very well conceived and structured.
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
|
Ah, Magnolia. What a beautiful plant, what delicious flowers. This excellent haiku really reminds and links to memory of scent and beauty. The satori line gives connection to memory and place. A delightful addition to the imagery in line 1 and two. Excellent entry. Very well conceived and structured.
Comment Written 14-May-2016
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
-
Thank you, Mark, for this wonderful review for my poem. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, and I sure appreciate your encouragement. Thanks for your kind words...as always. Thanks!
Comment from heyjude
Mystery author, well done on this 5-7-5 for the writing
prompt about spring. I love the smell of magnolia.
Right on with your syllable count.
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
|
Mystery author, well done on this 5-7-5 for the writing
prompt about spring. I love the smell of magnolia.
Right on with your syllable count.
Comment Written 14-May-2016
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
-
Thank you, Heyjude, for your great review and comments for my poem. I truly am grateful you took the time to read and share your kind words. I love their scent, too.Thank you!
Comment from judiverse
Magnolias are so lovely, but it's a shame they don't last longer. My mother-in-law had a beautiful magnolia tree, but the blossoms were always gone too soon. They are so fragrant they fill the spring air. If you're away from home, there's nothing better to remind you of it than the scent of the lovely flowers. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
|
Magnolias are so lovely, but it's a shame they don't last longer. My mother-in-law had a beautiful magnolia tree, but the blossoms were always gone too soon. They are so fragrant they fill the spring air. If you're away from home, there's nothing better to remind you of it than the scent of the lovely flowers. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 14-May-2016
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
-
Thank you, Judi, for your great review and comments for my poem. I truly am grateful you took the time to read and share your kind words. I really agree with you about wishing the blossoms lasted longer. Thank you!
-
You're welcome. I love the fragrant blossoms. judi
Comment from jonathan1
This piece succeeds in creating imagery which is quiet the accomplishment given the restrictions of this short for of poetry. I really enjoyed this piece.
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
|
This piece succeeds in creating imagery which is quiet the accomplishment given the restrictions of this short for of poetry. I really enjoyed this piece.
Comment Written 14-May-2016
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
-
Thank you, Jonathan, for your great review and comments for my poem. I truly am grateful you took the time to read and share your kind words. I'm pleased you enjoyed the imagery in the poem.Thank you!
