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A family's love is tested.

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Comment from judiverse
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Good for Jeff! He is certainly full of surprises. I can imagine the big bucks for a commercial during Super Bowl. Voice-overs are the coming thing. Animated features are quite the thing. When I was in college, one of the students got all the lead roles. He went on to do some theater and work on PBS. But his claim to fame came in doing voice-overs for Democratic party commercials. What Nicole said seems to have hit home. You were agreeable to making more money as long as you and Frank were both happy. judi

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 Comment Written 13-May-2016


reply by the author on 13-May-2016
    Thanks again, judi, for a detailed review. I'm glad one of your college made good. While some of what said is true, I could have argued that he supported us for ten years before I went back to work. (I waited for the kids to be in school full-time, but I couldn't wait to start teaching again.)
reply by judiverse on 14-May-2016
    You're welcome. The actor I mentioned recently died after suffering from Parkinson's disease. He married the leading lady in many of the college productions, and she survives him. judi
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
    Sounds like a wonderful love story even though the ending is sad.
reply by judiverse on 14-May-2016
    I hope Jeff's success is continuing. judi
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
    He's in a slump again, but spends his time writing a screenplay with a good friend.
    Violent gangster stuff with language as is his taste.
reply by judiverse on 14-May-2016
    Could be a hit on HBO! judi
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
    I would wish that for him. Finally recognized.
reply by judiverse on 15-May-2016
    So much animation, surely more voice-over opportunities. Jeff has been persistent, have to give him credit for that. judi
Comment from candyfink
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Kung Fu Panda, huh? lol ....anyway, this is well written and I don't see anything that needs to be changed or corrected. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 13-May-2016


reply by the author on 13-May-2016
    Thanks, Candy, for your support.