The Storm Cellar
100-word story24 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, that'll knock your socks off.
I enjoyed your short story. Good job with the format. That prompt is very limiting, but you handled it well.
Your lines flow smoothly and tell of an eerie event in the cellar. [why did I first think this was going to be about a tornado they were hiding from in the cellar?].
Good job and thanks for sharing.
I like the large, bold text style. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 11-May-2016
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Well, that'll knock your socks off.
I enjoyed your short story. Good job with the format. That prompt is very limiting, but you handled it well.
Your lines flow smoothly and tell of an eerie event in the cellar. [why did I first think this was going to be about a tornado they were hiding from in the cellar?].
Good job and thanks for sharing.
I like the large, bold text style. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 11-May-2016
reply by the author on 11-May-2016
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts for my micro story, Jan. Zim glad you enjoyed it and thanks for your kind best wishes in the contest. Storm cellars are used for protection from tornadoes, but some people use it for storage as well. Thanks!
Comment from damommy
What a good job. You've written a really creepy scene in just 100 words.
It's hard to say a lot in such a short piece, but you've done it very well.
Good job. I enjoyed reading this. 8-)
reply by the author on 11-May-2016
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What a good job. You've written a really creepy scene in just 100 words.
It's hard to say a lot in such a short piece, but you've done it very well.
Good job. I enjoyed reading this. 8-)
Comment Written 11-May-2016
reply by the author on 11-May-2016
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I'm delighted you enjoyed this micro story, damommy, and thanks for your comments. I'm glad you thought it was creepy,scene. Thanks so much!
Comment from DonandVicki
If I know young boys, if they are like my grandsons this youngster is probably playing a prank on his mother. A quick and enjoyable flash fiction.
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reply by the author on 11-May-2016
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If I know young boys, if they are like my grandsons this youngster is probably playing a prank on his mother. A quick and enjoyable flash fiction.
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Comment Written 11-May-2016
reply by the author on 11-May-2016
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Thanks for your review, DonandVicki. I appreciate your response, and I'm glad you imagined your own ending! Thanks so much for your comments.
Comment from candyfink
Now you know you have to continue that. I want to know what happened. I will watch out for new post of the story. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 11-May-2016
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Now you know you have to continue that. I want to know what happened. I will watch out for new post of the story. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 11-May-2016
reply by the author on 11-May-2016
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Thanks for taking the time to read and write a review for my micro story, candybarr. I appreciate your kind comments, and I'm delighted you want more. Thanks for your good luck wish in the contest.
