Comment from scd41

Excellent

The title and the story confirm the belief in the adage 'Love at first sight'. Though many refer to it as a satire or as an illusion, it could be a pleasant reality in some rare cases. The readers are in suspense to know what happened on the fateful day.

 Comment Written 13-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Thanks ever so much I'm glad you liked it. Well it happened to me, so it does exist. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from JBCaine

Excellent

Ulla-
Nice how you included and alluded to the childrens' passtime here. Very well done, and captures the attention right through the last line.
Best to you,
JBCaine-

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Aww, thank you so much for this great review. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from dbmccarter

Excellent

The use of the daisy chant is great and the build up of the romance is great. I even like the suspense of waiting for tonight.

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Thanks a lot for a great review. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

A modern day Cinderella. Mixed with traditions of using petals. You capture the emotions and excitement very well leaving the reader wanting to k is what happens. Structurally well written. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Thanks a lot for this great review. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from Dustybones

Excellent

It's very hard to write a one hundred word story. You manage to set the stage and complete it, leaving me wondering what will happen.

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Thanks a lot for the great review. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Mystery Author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, wonderful complete short story that reads very well and I truly wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Thanks a lot Eric for the great review. Much appreciated. All the best. Ulla:))

reply by Eric1 on 16-May-2016

You are welcome my friend

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

Ah...new love! Nothing can compare with the feeling of anticipation when you meet someone new and imagine what the future might bring for you both. Well done for catching that moment so well in so few words!

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 12-May-2016

Ahhhh, Alexis, what a lovely surprise this is and so unexpected. Well, I was trying to capture that elusive moment of meeting somebody new who may turn into the love of your life. Ulla xxx

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

This was a good take on this limited word story. It gave us a background and then left us with something to contemplate at the end. Good job and beast of luck.

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 12-May-2016

Thanks so much for this encouraging review. All best.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good, great job on love at first sight, that old game of he loves me he loves me not. good write and read, good luck on this and have a great day

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 12-May-2016

Thanks ever so much, and the good wishes. All the best.

Comment from jpduck

Excellent

Concise and effective, I thought. You manage to inject a lot of meaning into a hundred words. Best of luck with the contest.


Adrian

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 12-May-2016

Thanks ever so much for this great review. Yes, luck is needed and the votes of course. hehe. All the best.