Heathered Moors
Thrice betrayed52 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
a wraith washed up on shore ... love this phrase and the richness conjured up by the imagery.
The'heathered moors' ... lovely!
Sonali
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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a wraith washed up on shore ... love this phrase and the richness conjured up by the imagery.
The'heathered moors' ... lovely!
Sonali
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Sorry my reply is so long in coming, Selina. Thank you for this lovely review, I have been off FanStory for awhile, but glad to see your review just the same.
Lynn
Comment from RGstar
I didn't realize you were on my fan base. What a beautiful write. I am not sure why it reminds of ''Gone with The Wind'. beautiful aura with a serene repeating line. I will have to find you more often.
So good.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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I didn't realize you were on my fan base. What a beautiful write. I am not sure why it reminds of ''Gone with The Wind'. beautiful aura with a serene repeating line. I will have to find you more often.
So good.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 20-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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Thank you, RGstar. You are a most talented poet that I enjoy. Your comment means much to me.
Love,
Senyai
Comment from WSpena07
Wow, what a beautifully told tragedy. My heart goes out to the narrator who is filled with such love for this undeserving character. Already her/his heart is broken, but not enough to stop loving this person, even though he/she knows that twice more the character will be unfaithful. That's how I took it, at least. This reads like a classic. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-May-2016
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Wow, what a beautifully told tragedy. My heart goes out to the narrator who is filled with such love for this undeserving character. Already her/his heart is broken, but not enough to stop loving this person, even though he/she knows that twice more the character will be unfaithful. That's how I took it, at least. This reads like a classic. Well done.
Comment Written 20-May-2016
reply by the author on 20-May-2016
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Thank you, WSpena. What a wonderful review! You have made my day with your encouraging words.
Senyai :)
Comment from Serendipity!
There is something hauntingly beautiful about this lines. I can't begin to say which are my favorite lines, they are all so gripping. "Oh love my love..." But why 'twice more' that tantalizes my curiosity.
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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There is something hauntingly beautiful about this lines. I can't begin to say which are my favorite lines, they are all so gripping. "Oh love my love..." But why 'twice more' that tantalizes my curiosity.
Comment Written 12-May-2016
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Thanks so much, Serendipity! You are very generous in bestowing the gift of six. So delighted you liked this first attempted triolet:)
Senyai
Comment from dragonpoet
Nicely written triolet about a person betrayed by a love. But it seems like the person is willing to give a second chance but the love won't show up.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Nicely written triolet about a person betrayed by a love. But it seems like the person is willing to give a second chance but the love won't show up.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-May-2016
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Thank you, Dragonpoet, for your review and insight. No they won't show up on those heathered moors... nor any other time nor place.
I appreciate your kind thoughts and encouraging words :)
Senyai
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from nancyrabbrose
Your poem sounds like the moors, or at least the feeling I believe one would have there. The repetition, according to the poetic form, is perfect to give the bleak, sorrowful feeling intended by the poet.
Well done.
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Your poem sounds like the moors, or at least the feeling I believe one would have there. The repetition, according to the poetic form, is perfect to give the bleak, sorrowful feeling intended by the poet.
Well done.
Comment Written 12-May-2016
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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So glad the atmosphere came through as intended. Great review that made my day.
Thank you, Nancy!
Senyai
Comment from rbutner
This lovely work evokes an image of Scotland, not only due to the title but because of the wording. I really enjoyed it, though it is sad. I can see it sung by a fire in an old castle.
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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This lovely work evokes an image of Scotland, not only due to the title but because of the wording. I really enjoyed it, though it is sad. I can see it sung by a fire in an old castle.
Comment Written 12-May-2016
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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What a lovely review, Rbutner! So glad you enjoyed my first attempted triolet...
Thank you.
Senyai
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A lovely Triolet poem
True to style and very well presented.
I liked the choice of strong repeating lines.
Good luck in the contest.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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A lovely Triolet poem
True to style and very well presented.
I liked the choice of strong repeating lines.
Good luck in the contest.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 12-May-2016
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Hi Shirley,
Thanks much for your wonderful review. Your encouraging words inspire me anew...
Senyai
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi SENYAI,
I have read a few of these poems now and they are growing on me. It is not a form that I am to familiar with but like this one a lot. You have captured that moment of realization in betrayal and the repetitive line just drives home that message even more.
A sad poem but very enjoyable.
Brenda:))x
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Hi SENYAI,
I have read a few of these poems now and they are growing on me. It is not a form that I am to familiar with but like this one a lot. You have captured that moment of realization in betrayal and the repetitive line just drives home that message even more.
A sad poem but very enjoyable.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 12-May-2016
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Thank you, Brenda. Your great review simply made my day :)
Senyai
Comment from Eric1
Hi Senyai, This is a really good entry for this particular competition, beautifully romantic words with an excellent repetition in this wonderful triolet, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Hi Senyai, This is a really good entry for this particular competition, beautifully romantic words with an excellent repetition in this wonderful triolet, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 12-May-2016
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Eric, your kind words and generous review are deeply appreciated. Thanks for the well wishes too :)
Senyai
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You are welcome my friend
