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When Blood Collides

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A family's love is tested.

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Comment from robyn corum
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I haven't seen the aforementioned movie and don't plan to. Thanks for the heads up, actually. It sounds utterly stupid. But I think our kids are naturally changed a bit by the people they get attached to, hopefully, though - some of your daughter's good stuff rubbed off on the idiot???

 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    It did. You'll find out later. Happy chapter coming up soon.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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Unfortunately, there are sick people who find such things humorous. I am sure my son (who I am estranged from, would love it). I would vomit myself. I guess you can't pick your kids, their friends or spouses. Too bad. I would have picked better. Well written, but sad, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Thanks, Debbie, for checking this out. I can visualize frat boys getting a kick out of it. At least, the mean ones, the bullies.
Comment from mermaids
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I agree with you here, I would never show a disgusting movie to anyone and do not see the point of them. I am sorry your son-in-law did this, it sounds like he does not have any common sense. Too bad your daughter grows to be more like him.

 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Five years have gone by and he has improved. Nichole too. More about that in another chapter.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Jeff sounds like a sicko. And Nicole should have stopped him with you and other respectable people there. You never talked to her about it because you probably knew it would end in an argument. Let's hope they don't have kids. I imagine they'd end up in juvenile prison!

 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Nichole told Jeff when he proposed that no way would she go through childbirth. I suspect that subconsciously she knew he wouldn't be the best role model.
reply by Phyllis Stewart on 08-May-2016
    Well, that's one good thing, I guess. She's the only one who has to tolerate him, and that works ... so far.
Comment from Jay Squires
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Jackass, The Movie, was certainly a cult classic and nothing I would have liked my son-in-law and our daughter to entertain us with. I can understand your chagrin. I don't recall the movie "The Manson Family." Was the fact that Frank didn't remember it the result of early onset dementia?

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Nichole did say that she recalled signs of dementia back then although she couldn't put a name to it. Early onset is when its starts in the late forties. I didn't note signs until Frank reached seventy. I give him two more years before it's full-blown.
Comment from Helen Bach
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You have brought this evening vividly to life with you able pen. I wonder what reaction you would have caused if you both upped and followed Lorenzo's wife.

This does not sound like reasonable behaviour to me for even in my younger days I would not inflict my favourite horror upon my captive in-laws.

A reasonable person would choose a general film all could enjoy or cater to their needs above your own.

I am not familiar with this film I think it'll give it a pass but I will look forward to your next instalment for that is much more interesting and worthwhile x

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Thanks, Helen. Appreciated your input.
Comment from royowen
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It would have been very painful for you. I remember my younger daughter, when younger,reacting badly to an animated version of " transformers", we switched it off Immediately. They say that one becomes desensitised to "way out" movies, and things like "porno" movies don't satisfy anymore, they need more obtuse versions, I think that's real actual "playing out"becomes more important. It must have been painful as a parent, well done, well written,, very brave sharing. No typos or syntax, well done blessings, Roy

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    I've heard that too about people becoming desensitized. As parents we should be aware of a child's reaction and vice versa. I so want to see that movie about the priests who molested children, but out of respect for hubby's devoted Catholicism, I'm passing it by.
reply by royowen on 08-May-2016
    I never understood why priests can't marry, it says if one burns with lust then they should marry, 1Cor. 7:9, I'm sure there would be less sex crime in the church, Roy
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Problem is they are pediphiles. Not okay.
reply by royowen on 09-May-2016
    That's true,
Comment from candyfink
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This is well written and I see why you are a very accomplished writer on here. I don't see any mistakes in your writing. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Thank you, candybarr. Love the moniker, but hope it's a dark chocolate one. LOL
Comment from foxangie123
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Your pin name goes so well with the way you write as it is always on fire meaning hot. A good thing by the way. Keep em coming and Happy Mother's Day.

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 Comment Written 08-May-2016


reply by the author on 08-May-2016
    Thanks, foxie. Happy Mother's Day to you too, if it applies.