Buttons
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Comment from Helen Bach
Ooh. This is developing nicely. Great response from Mary to her creepy husband she's yet to find out the man she's just shared a kiss with is an even bigger creep.
Can't wait to find out what reaction her words might cause. "find your own effing ride home' he he. Go girl.
Joe thinks he is a very clever man, I am your loyal reader til the end x
reply by the author on 11-May-2016
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Ooh. This is developing nicely. Great response from Mary to her creepy husband she's yet to find out the man she's just shared a kiss with is an even bigger creep.
Can't wait to find out what reaction her words might cause. "find your own effing ride home' he he. Go girl.
Joe thinks he is a very clever man, I am your loyal reader til the end x
Comment Written 11-May-2016
reply by the author on 11-May-2016
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Thank you so much. I am enjoying this too. I got really busy at work and haven't written much lately , but I can't wait to get back to it.
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I bet the story is running at the back of your mind the whole time. I think you might have something here, keep it up x
Comment from Ulla
Hi Judy, You certainly have your own unique writing style and I like it. I don't know but it certainly gets my attention.
She put them in her new home, the quest room. = the guest room.
I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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Hi Judy, You certainly have your own unique writing style and I like it. I don't know but it certainly gets my attention.
She put them in her new home, the quest room. = the guest room.
I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 10-May-2016
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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thank you Ulla. I will go and fix this quest room. I thought I did but I probably missed one of them.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I am going to have to go back and read the earlier chapters, this was so good, I need to know what led up to it all. Your writing is terrific, I think I might learn something reading your prose. Excellent work, but now I want to learn more about Mary and Joe. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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I am going to have to go back and read the earlier chapters, this was so good, I need to know what led up to it all. Your writing is terrific, I think I might learn something reading your prose. Excellent work, but now I want to learn more about Mary and Joe. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 09-May-2016
reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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Thank you so much , I think you will enjoy it. I have learned so much from you and others on this site.
Comment from winnona
The story s progressing nicely. Very realistic and full of imagination. Just enough details for the reader to fill in the gaps bringing it to life for them. The details and imagery are well done.
reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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The story s progressing nicely. Very realistic and full of imagination. Just enough details for the reader to fill in the gaps bringing it to life for them. The details and imagery are well done.
Comment Written 09-May-2016
reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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thank you so much. Mary is really changing.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This should read... back (into) the Bar. I was disoriented thinking I had missed a chapter because I remembered Mary leaving the Bar.UGH. The thought of having romantic feelings for a monster like him makes me nauseous. He is very clever covering his tracks and re-inventing himself. However... The
best laid plans of mice and men often goes astray! Nancy
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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This should read... back (into) the Bar. I was disoriented thinking I had missed a chapter because I remembered Mary leaving the Bar.UGH. The thought of having romantic feelings for a monster like him makes me nauseous. He is very clever covering his tracks and re-inventing himself. However... The
best laid plans of mice and men often goes astray! Nancy
Comment Written 08-May-2016
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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Yes, He is disgusting, but clever and a con man, Mary could fall for it since her own husband is a creep. We will see.
Comment from tony bronk
A very interesting story, indeed! It looks like for now on, that I will have to keep up with the rest of the story...for sure! Tony Bronk
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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A very interesting story, indeed! It looks like for now on, that I will have to keep up with the rest of the story...for sure! Tony Bronk
Comment Written 07-May-2016
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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thank you tony. I am having a great time writing it.
Comment from Douglas Paul
This is another good chapter, Judy. Anice twist with Mary's change if attitude after Joe's kiss, Another nice twist with him setting up his boss for a fall
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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This is another good chapter, Judy. Anice twist with Mary's change if attitude after Joe's kiss, Another nice twist with him setting up his boss for a fall
Comment Written 07-May-2016
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
thank you, Mary is finally standing up for herself. And Joe, had things planned all the time.
Comment from Berta Dickerson
Judy,
This is an awesome chapter. What just happened?
Really. I read it 3 times. Oh so now I think I need to read the previous writings. Such transitions were difficult to follow.
The book "Buttons" is on my watch list.
Berta
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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Judy,
This is an awesome chapter. What just happened?
Really. I read it 3 times. Oh so now I think I need to read the previous writings. Such transitions were difficult to follow.
The book "Buttons" is on my watch list.
Berta
Comment Written 07-May-2016
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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Thank You so much. This is a developing story I need to tell.
Comment from sage17611
This is a very steamy story, very well written with good presentation of the characters. I did see one possible correction: "His demands, "Buy new sheets for the quest room", possible correction: "guest room." I like the flow of the story which is interesting, especially the fire that's heating up between Joe and Mary. Good job with this writing.
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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This is a very steamy story, very well written with good presentation of the characters. I did see one possible correction: "His demands, "Buy new sheets for the quest room", possible correction: "guest room." I like the flow of the story which is interesting, especially the fire that's heating up between Joe and Mary. Good job with this writing.
Comment Written 07-May-2016
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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thank you sage, it is happening day by day and developing with the help of people like you.
Comment from foxangie123
I knew I would be blessed today with your gift to write my friend. I was too. I'm a big fan as you know and I will find your work as long as I can see and have Internet connection.
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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I knew I would be blessed today with your gift to write my friend. I was too. I'm a big fan as you know and I will find your work as long as I can see and have Internet connection.
Comment Written 07-May-2016
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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when I start to write every day, i know you are listening and you will tel me if you understand or if you don't . today this chapter just exploded and it was what I needed to say.
