Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

This is so very good a palindrome .... love it! This artwork is awesome the word configuration is excellent and the message is very clear. Love it! God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the aggravating thing.

Comment from ciliverde

Excellent

Lol, yeah it would take me a month or two as well. These d_mn things are hard! What crazy person invented this form? But you have done well, your lines are brief and to the point - they work beautifully in both directions. Poor bunny! I guess we all end up as lunch eventually. I do love the cry that hawks make - LOVE to hear them. We have tons of them where I live in SoCal.
Great job,
Carol

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

We don't have as many as when I was young. Too many people. You want to see a yardfull of chickens do a magic disappearing act? Just left a hawk whistle. Want to see a hawk depart? Let a murder of crows find it. Want to see a farmer go broke? Let the rabbits and crows find his fields...thanks very much for reading and reviewing.

reply by ciliverde on 07-May-2016

The crows harass the hawks, don't they? I see them do it here, quite often. I wonder why they do it?

reply by the author on 08-May-2016

I think hawks munch on fledgling crows. They are natural enemies.

Comment from RosieCus

Excellent

Enjoyable read and a good contest entry. I don't think any improvement is needed
It's great as it is.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.

reply by RosieCus on 07-May-2016

You're welcome

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Knowing how much fiddling these can take, I'm in awe of your ability to create such a good one in so short a time. The change in sense in the second half is fluent and the word order unforced. Congratulations!

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

I felt like I was shooting in bad light. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing. What I've seen so far makes me feel like the boy on the stool, in the corner, with the conical cap...there's good stuff out there.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Lige, I think you have very effectively gotten your story of bloody death and horrid destruction of the *sob* poor tiny, defenseless bunny *sob* across. I think I see how it is. --sniff-- It's okay. I can handle this kind of thing. --sniff--sniff-- No problem. I'm touch. *****wwahhhhhhh!!!*****

Oh. --sniff-- Sorry. Very good work. Great. --sniff-- Job..

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 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Do you know what a rabbit can do to a row of tiny bean sprouts? No quarter! Cute little dickenses,
though...on the farm the hawk was also the enemy, if one had free range chickens. Thanks very much, Robyn.

reply by robyn corum on 07-May-2016

Sure. Thank you!

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Well Ellijay I think your Palindrome is lovely and I especially enjoy the rabbit and the hawk. This is written perfectly and a top drawer write in my view.

Great job with this. Remember to register in the poetry writing thread.

Love it!

Gloria

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 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

I don't know...palindrome ain't mah thang. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

reply by Gloria .... on 07-May-2016

We're going to do something different next week, but I think your Palindrome is terrific.