Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

You have really captured the emotion in this piece. The whole presentation adds to the emotion. It certainly makes you think. Good luck in the contest, a powerful poem.

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Oh my, your poem and the picture really cause an impact - especially 'pander your pain'. A horrible situation but one that needs to be told.

Good luck in the contest.

teresa

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 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

This is such a moving write. It holds truthful power and knowledge into a world of facts which us sad. Why can't we change it I oftentimes wonder. See you at voting. Exceptional.

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 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thanks for reviewing. For some questions, there seems to be no answers.