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Comment from Helen Bach
I love your writing Judy. I am a true fan.
Ooh I love that Margarita fancies Jeremy. Delicately done. Jeremy is a sweetheart. A lovely distraction to develop their budding friendship whilst watching such horrible tapes.
Ooh and the emerging connections, I hope Mary is safe. But oh dear he has a button.
And what a close to the chapter, I was almost applauding too. Will this new Joe still need to kill. I can't wait to find out.
Great stuff looking forward to the next. This deserved a six, alas I'm empty x
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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I love your writing Judy. I am a true fan.
Ooh I love that Margarita fancies Jeremy. Delicately done. Jeremy is a sweetheart. A lovely distraction to develop their budding friendship whilst watching such horrible tapes.
Ooh and the emerging connections, I hope Mary is safe. But oh dear he has a button.
And what a close to the chapter, I was almost applauding too. Will this new Joe still need to kill. I can't wait to find out.
Great stuff looking forward to the next. This deserved a six, alas I'm empty x
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you so much. I have had very good reviews. There was reviewer who was offended that the people clapped after Joe's speech. but I feel that would be real in this situation. When you were finding out if your child was one of the victims. What do you think.
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I think this would absolutely be realistic, given the bravery he displayed in that situation. Only we know his little secret. No matter how good your writing there will always be others that see things differently.
Pay it no mind, I would be surprised if anyone else saw it that way. Keep doing what your doing, its something quite special, I think x
Comment from Dustybones
I believe that you are religious. As much as may be happy about someones death, I'd still never want to feel that way about any type of sickness.
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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I believe that you are religious. As much as may be happy about someones death, I'd still never want to feel that way about any type of sickness.
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Dusty I so agree with you that no one should be happy about another persons death, This is the death of a child molestor who hurt their children. I think that is why I think some of them would applaud that death. But I am sure I understand why you are saying that.
Comment from heyjude
Judy, very interesting and how relevant. So much of these type
of thing is going on in every church now. Very sad. The only
thing I saw ... is in the fifth paragraph it is ... her responsibility to
the God. Just wondered if you needed the.. Otherwise, well done.
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Judy, very interesting and how relevant. So much of these type
of thing is going on in every church now. Very sad. The only
thing I saw ... is in the fifth paragraph it is ... her responsibility to
the God. Just wondered if you needed the.. Otherwise, well done.
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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thank you for the detail work, that is what I love and no I did not want a ....I would have never noticed it. I so appreciate you.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
He is undergoing a metamorphoses and
will soon be very different from the
former Joe on the outside. However he
will still have the same twisted mind.
It's scary to think he is in love with
Mary. What will he do when she shuns him?
Good charter Jyoti. Well done. Nancy
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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He is undergoing a metamorphoses and
will soon be very different from the
former Joe on the outside. However he
will still have the same twisted mind.
It's scary to think he is in love with
Mary. What will he do when she shuns him?
Good charter Jyoti. Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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We will see,. She may not shun him. but he is evil and that will not pay in the end.
Comment from winnona
Another well-written chapter. Again your words are well chosen and concise. You leave enough detail in to make it realistic. You also leave enough out for the reader to fill in the blanks with their own imagination.
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Another well-written chapter. Again your words are well chosen and concise. You leave enough detail in to make it realistic. You also leave enough out for the reader to fill in the blanks with their own imagination.
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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thank you Winnona, I want to thank you for your constant support. It means the world to me.
Comment from Douglas Paul
I thought you developed the story nicely in this chapter on several fronts. I particularly liked the nun and the cop. I saw no errors and the story flowed smoothly. Good job on this, Judy
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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I thought you developed the story nicely in this chapter on several fronts. I particularly liked the nun and the cop. I saw no errors and the story flowed smoothly. Good job on this, Judy
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you so much. I truly am not sure where I am going with this but it is keeping me writing.
Comment from aryr
This is a powerful piece of writing regarding a sensitive issue. The characters in play are supportive of each other and enhance the details provided. There is just enough suspense to keep the reader interested enough to keep reading. There are strong emotions presented and indications of strong propounding results. Great reading, thank you.
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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This is a powerful piece of writing regarding a sensitive issue. The characters in play are supportive of each other and enhance the details provided. There is just enough suspense to keep the reader interested enough to keep reading. There are strong emotions presented and indications of strong propounding results. Great reading, thank you.
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you so much. I truly am not sure where I am going with this but it is keeping me writing.
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you are most welcome
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
What a fascinating story.Your work is so expressive with well-chosen words. The more I read of this the more I realize you've done a great job . I found no errors, other than I would have liked to read more.
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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What a fascinating story.Your work is so expressive with well-chosen words. The more I read of this the more I realize you've done a great job . I found no errors, other than I would have liked to read more.
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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You are why I keep writing. When I was young I got slapped by my teacher because of my handwriting. I couldn't form the letters right.. When the home computer came out I was able to write whats in my head without stopping. It is such a gift to me.
